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A minute ago,
You were in history class.
Now get to English.

A minute ago,
Your day was going perfect.
Failed math test stares back.

A minute ago
You were mixing chemicals.
Counting minutes down.

You exit the school.
Plotting away your weekend,
Replying to texts.

A minute ago,
You were crossing the street-alive,
A car swerves at you.

Past moments flashing,
As you’re lying on pavement,
Blood flows endlessly.

People run to you,
There’s nothing that they can do,
Your minute is up.



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Berny said...
Dec. 10, 2010 at 9:07 am:

So far my favourite, so intense.

It is pure awesomeness!!!!

 
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morsal :D said...
Oct. 16, 2010 at 10:23 am:
nicccee nicce i might even steal this one from u some day :)
 
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maggiebar1 said...
Oct. 11, 2010 at 4:09 pm:
i like it.... its a bit darker but in a lighter sort of way. did that make any sense? haha anyhoo the whole texting thing i think is hysterical.. it shows the real materialistic way of us teens
 
through_my_eyes replied...
Oct. 11, 2010 at 4:31 pm :

lol. It made sence to me. So i guess it did make sence :p (i'm not so sure 'bout the rest of the world :p)

Lol. In my cynical opinion i think that its not just teens that are materalistic, i think its all humans. Just want more.

By the way thanks for the feedback :D

 
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through_my_eyes said...
Oct. 4, 2010 at 9:25 pm:

lol. sarcasm much?

You've always stored me under the file name "ziddi"

Glad to see your appreciation of the more intellectual ;) jokes :p

 
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Fahim said...
Oct. 4, 2010 at 9:22 pm:

nice poem... no doubt that u are so so ssssssssssso intelegent

 

 
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MaddieGrThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Oct. 4, 2010 at 4:18 pm:
Amazing :D I love poems about time.. Even though I actually which time was never measured. Its such a pain when it is, cuz then you're wishing for it to go faster and lose the value in it. Cuz you never know how much time you have left. As your poem proves :)
 
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