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"Best Friends"

You are there for me,
leaves we play in, snow we throw
anywhere we go.




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lilliemaisThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jul. 10, 2012 at 6:51 am:
This haiku is very sweet - I like the indirect analogy you used by the passing of the seasons (through the leaves and the snow) to the passing of time and how this friendship lasts beyond that. While reading this poem, I felt a warmth arouse within me . Very good job on this one!   
 
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