Ripples

September 13, 2010
By milforce SILVER, Bloomington, Illinois
milforce SILVER, Bloomington, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
"Those who have the ability to act, have the responsibility to act."


The autumn leaf falls,
Making the soft grass it's pier,
A ripple is formed.



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on Oct. 26 2011 at 6:40 am
milforce SILVER, Bloomington, Illinois
9 articles 0 photos 135 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Those who have the ability to act, have the responsibility to act."

Yes, you're basically right. My point was that one leaf in the grass is the same as one droplet of water in the ocean. The two were just playing each other's parts. Thanks, by the way.

on Oct. 25 2011 at 10:14 am
RyanTyler PLATINUM, Windsor, Connecticut
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Favorite Quote:
"A myth is a religion in which no one no longer believes." James Feibleman

I love the way the leaves were supposed to represent the ocean. That was what it was supposed to be right. If I'm wrong tell me, but I still like it. :)




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