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As the branch weakens,
And breaks apart from the tree,
So too do lost dreams.



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LaceeJade This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Nov. 2, 2011 at 8:31 pm:

Very emotional.

It is amazing!

 
milforce replied...
Nov. 2, 2011 at 9:30 pm :
Thanks so much!
 
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DamonSalvatore1864This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Oct. 26, 2011 at 11:07 am:
Love it. Short, but it has a lot of emotion in it.
 
milforce replied...
Oct. 26, 2011 at 4:31 pm :
Thanks a bunch!
 
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RyanTyler said...
Oct. 25, 2011 at 10:17 am:
Sad but true. I liked it though. Keep it up. :):):)
 
milforce replied...
Oct. 26, 2011 at 6:39 am :
Thank you and I will
 
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