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The sakura float,
Gently across the ravine,
Leaving an echo.

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LaceeJade This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Nov. 2, 2011 at 8:30 pm

Very well written.

Short and sweet also.

milforce replied...
Nov. 3, 2011 at 8:26 pm
Thank you so much
RyanTyler said...
Oct. 25, 2011 at 10:01 am
Nice haiku, I don't see those that offten. Really good imagery in only ten words.
milforce replied...
Oct. 26, 2011 at 6:38 am
Thanks, I appreciate the feedback
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