Nature's Love MAG

September 6, 2010
By gehremi17 GOLD, Union Grove, Wisconsin
gehremi17 GOLD, Union Grove, Wisconsin
11 articles 1 photo 1 comment

Shells are glimmering.
Fish twist and turn while swimming.
Water lilies float.


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on Jun. 19 2013 at 5:05 am
beautifulspirit PLATINUM, Alpharetta, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams.
--Eleanor Roosevelt

Love the title~ simple yet powerful

gehremi17 GOLD said...
on Aug. 19 2011 at 5:03 pm
gehremi17 GOLD, Union Grove, Wisconsin
11 articles 1 photo 1 comment
Thank you!! :) and yes I'll check out your poems!

on Aug. 18 2011 at 10:12 pm
dia.dreamer GOLD, Kochi, Other
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Favorite Quote:
"I saw an angel in the marble and carved until I set him free." - Michelangelo
"I took a deep breath and listened to the old bray of my heart: I am, I am, I am." - Sylvia Plath

I absolutely loved the imagery...simple but warm. :) check out my poems too! and keep writing... :D

on Jul. 13 2011 at 10:19 am
to.hold.the.sun SILVER, Maryville, Tennessee
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Favorite Quote:
"You spend your whole life stuck in the labyrinth, thinking about how you'll escape it one day, and how awesome it will be, and imagining that future keeps you going, but you never do it. You just use the future to escape the present." -John Green

I love the imagery in this, and the simplicity. So many poems get clogged up with useless stuff, but one-stanza haikus get a point across, a picture in your mind, in three short lines. It adds more by being concise. And you did it wonderfully!




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