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God stole a sharp silver star
Held it without a scarred hand
And cracked it open

Watched the yoke scuttle
Through the sky to the pavement
With the moon’s ardor

Made a one eyed sun
Sizzling on the pavement
And then he ate it



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Dancing2222 said...
Aug. 21, 2011 at 10:06 pm:
That was very cute and creative! I love reading all of your work. Write for as long as you live. You have a natural gift.
 
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Thesilentraven This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 25, 2010 at 4:35 pm:
Very creative poem! Well done.
 
Coryssa replied...
Aug. 26, 2010 at 8:41 pm :
Your poem was really good and had great description. I like how you did a poem about God.
 
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