June (Or, Of The Honey Locust.)

Dry rain, showering
From a tree. Bees hover, drink.
Parched buds in my hair.





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Aderes18 said...
Jun. 9, 2011 at 2:25 pm
In a couple of words, I feel that you captured summer. :)
 
IamtheshyStargirl replied...
Jun. 13, 2011 at 5:54 pm
Le hannon, Aderes.
 
Aderes18 replied...
Jun. 14, 2011 at 7:52 am

What does that mean?

(although I'm sure it's something nice) 

:) 

 
IamtheshyStargirl replied...
Jun. 14, 2011 at 11:10 am
'thank you' in elvish :) I just get sick of typing 'thank you' over and over in my comments, I like doing things a little differently as much as I can.
 
Aderes18 replied...
Jun. 15, 2011 at 11:14 am

Oh. In that case, 

GRACIAS FOR ALL YOUR WONDERFUL COMMENTS!!! 

 
IamtheshyStargirl replied...
Jun. 15, 2011 at 8:52 pm
You are very welcome :)
 
timeformetofly7 said...
Feb. 7, 2011 at 10:42 pm
Awwww ^^ thats so pretty and cutee!! there was a sweet mood/tone to it...
 
IamtheshyStargirl replied...
Feb. 8, 2011 at 4:45 pm
Thank you, I wrote it while sitting out under my honey locust tree with my little sisters :)
 
Thesilentraven This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Sept. 20, 2010 at 5:45 pm
This haiku is very eloquent. Once again, I am overwhelmed by your words. I don't know if you'll get this, but their consistency was... silky. No matter, it's a very beautiful poem and a joy to read. Thanks for brightening my day.
 
IamtheStargirl replied...
Sept. 20, 2010 at 6:22 pm

Silky, wow, thanks, I don't know why, but that description made me laugh :) I love it when people describe my own words to me. I love the many different points of view.

I'm glad I could brighten your day :) That's one of my strivings in life, to brighten people's days by shining my very brightest.

 
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