Twilight in Haiku

June 17, 2010
By Anonymous

I am abandoned
It's better for my mother
If I just go away

God, I hate it here
It's wet and cold and boring
Nobody likes me

Wait-what's that? Who's he?
God, he's gorgeous. And alone!
I want to learn more.

Damn. He's rude and mean!
But-I'm dreaming about him.
And God, he's gorgeous.

There's something that draws
Me like a moth to the flame
Fatally pretty

I think-could it be?
But that's so impossible!
He couldn't-could he?

Hands cold to the touch.
Godlike strength in those thin arms.
Never in the sun.

Vampire! Vampire! I
Know that you are a vampire!
I can handle this!

No, no I cannot.
Those vamps are scaring me, Edward.
They want to eat me!

Safety. Protection.
Ice-cold barriers from harm.
I lounge in his care.

A single phone call
Shattering the illusions
I've lost. He's got her.

Beloved mother
Helpless in this unseen force
With love I trapped you

It's all I can do
I must give myself for her
I can't ever win

Racing to meet death
Feet trodding on promises
Trading life for life

Oh, cruel deception!
How could I have been so stupid?
Death extends his hands...

Avenging angel
Emerging from shattered glass
But it is too late

White hospital walls
Smiling doctors and nurses
Thank God for safety!

Icy cold hands touch
My waist erupts in goosebumps
All is right again

The author's comments:
Twilight! haiku. If you didn't get that from the title.

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on Jul. 18 2010 at 8:05 am
WinterMoon GOLD, Waynesburg, Kentucky
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Favorite Quote:
life is hard, but it could be harder
Suicide is for people who are too weak for the real world.
Those who dance are thought to be crazy by those who don’t hear the music.
People change, things go wrong. Just remember, life goes on.
What you feed your mind is what it gives back to you!
Be conscious of your subconscious mind. It’s the storage area for all the things you don’t pay attention to. It will eventually yield and even take over your conscious mind.
Life is all about challenges. To become an over comer, you don’t have to allow obstacles to become an impediment, but rather a stepping stone to your goals.
I have failed over and over in my life and that is why I succeed.
Imitation is Limitation.
Life is like a novel with the end ripped out.
Life is like a game of baseball
You’ll never know if you make the home run
Life is about creating yourself, not finding yourself!
There could be many options in your life, but before this life you had no option. So live with it
Life is like a dream. There’s good times and there’s nightmares. Life will only last so long, but your dreams will go on forever.
“Life isn’t about waiting for the storm to pass. It’s about dancing in the rain..!”
“Enjoy what you can, endure what you must”
Love never ends, but life does.
Things turn out best for people who make the best out of the way things turn out
Love is like a rainbow: the more you see it, the more you realize what a miracle it really is.
Life is about falling – Living is about getting backup.
never have regrets, because at one point everything you did in life was exactly what you wanted
“And in the end, it’s not the years in your life that count. It’s the life in your years.”
Dreams are like stars…one blows up and another one gets brighter
Yesterday is history. Tomorrow is a mystery. Today is a gift. That’s why it’s called the present.
You only live once, but if you work it right, once is enough.
God, if I can’t have what I want, let me want what I have.
Life is like an onion: You peel it off one layer at a time, and sometimes you weep.

I really liked it!!! If you like Twilight you should read "The Guardian". It is Twilight fan fiction that I wrote! It's called The guardian! Here is the summary:

Summary for This Series: The Guardian is a series that will take you out of the harsh world around you, only to throw you into an even harsher one. Isabella was once a guardian angel, but after the decision to show herself to her assignment ultimately kills the girl she was suppose to be guarding, her wings are taken from her and she is thrust into the world of emptiness. After centuries of loneliness, the fallen angel takes it upon herself to protect Edward Mason, a newborn baby. Five years after his birth, Bella makes the same fatal decision for Edward that she made for her first and last assignment.

It might not be validatedyet, so you may have to wait for a week! Read it!

on Jul. 16 2010 at 8:39 am
WhiteBear SILVER, Beckenham, Kent, Other
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Favorite Quote:
Darkness cannot drive out darkness, only light can do that. Hate cannot drive out hate, only love can do that.

that's really good! fab idea to put twilight into haiku!!! you did a really great job :)

on Jul. 15 2010 at 10:31 pm
crubs33 DIAMOND, Lido Beach, New York
58 articles 3 photos 750 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The most courageous act is still to think for yourself. Aloud."- Coco Chanel
Life isn't about surviving the storm, it's about learning to dance in the rain.

Haha i love twilight and ive read the books twice!! love it keep it up!!!

on Jul. 15 2010 at 4:01 pm
alaskatrailmutt, Jefferson, Maryland
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I like it very nice. I can tell you actually might have read the book. Wich is awesome. It's anoying when people talk or complain about twilight when you can tell all they know about it is from whta they have heard not from what they have read.


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