A small forest in town

June 8, 2010
Bird in tree, head cocked.
Deer steps, vague silhouette.
Girl sees deer, breath stops.

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Aderes18 said...
Jun. 9, 2011 at 2:30 pm
In few words, you told a story. Bravo. :)
IamtheshyStargirl replied...
Jun. 13, 2011 at 3:55 pm
I am running out of ways to thank you, you're so awesome.
Aderes18 replied...
Jun. 14, 2011 at 7:53 am
Thanks! :) 
Thesilentraven This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Sept. 20, 2010 at 5:55 pm
Very brief, and very nice. As you might guess, I am unbelievably fond of birds. I found this to be a great description. Although I get so sad, when birds fly away while I approach.
IamtheStargirl replied...
Sept. 20, 2010 at 6:32 pm

Le hannon :)

I love birds too, I've always wanted a pet bird-wise. But it's impossible to raise baby birds that have fallen from the nest, and my house would not work at all for domestic birds.

Don't you wish that you could speak to birds? Don't you wish you could tell them, or help them understand that you mean no harm when approaching? It seems impossible...

IamtheStargirl replied...
Sept. 20, 2010 at 7:43 pm
Though probably not as much as you do.
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