June 5, 2010
Fairy wings shimmer
Gossamer, like spun glass thread
They are so pretty

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beautifulspirit This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Dec. 30, 2011 at 8:38 am
Cool~ I love fairies!! said...
Oct. 9, 2010 at 8:29 am
i see amazzing imagery here!! ^^ that made me feel fairy-ish nd sparkley lol
ThatClarinetPerson replied...
Oct. 10, 2010 at 7:19 pm
Abigail V. said...
Jul. 14, 2010 at 10:30 pm
That's a really good first haiku! For so few words, you painted a picture in my mind. You should keep at it. 
Lanier42 replied...
Jul. 15, 2010 at 11:49 am
thank you very much, abigail.
ultrabookworm said...
Jul. 13, 2010 at 10:35 pm
I love haikus. Good job! =D
Lanier42 replied...
Jul. 14, 2010 at 12:07 pm
thank you :) (ps. i still think that he was mean to the receptionist =P)
Jellybean9898 said...
Jul. 8, 2010 at 4:38 pm
i liked the gossammer line.  that was very unique.
Lanier42 replied...
Jul. 8, 2010 at 6:58 pm
thank you! i read a book called "Gossamer" by lois lowry, so thats where that came from.
Lanier42 said...
Jul. 7, 2010 at 8:39 am

haha. dear self,

i love this haiku. the imagery is outstanding!

love, myself


Lanier42 replied...
Jul. 9, 2010 at 1:16 pm

see, self? you are amazing!


=P oh, jeez.

Healing_Angel This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Nov. 13, 2010 at 7:29 pm
I like it! Great imagery! :) 
ThatClarinetPerson replied...
Nov. 14, 2010 at 7:29 am
Another thanks! oh, the things I do when I'm bored.
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