A Wedding

I lift off the veil
From my loves beautiful face
How I longed for this





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beautifulspirit This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Apr. 1, 2012 at 5:39 pm
Sweet wedding poem~ By the title, I was thinking it would be written from the woman's perspective.
 
beautifulspirit This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Apr. 1, 2012 at 5:39 pm
Sweet wedding poem~ By the title, I was thinking it would be written from the woman's perspective.
 
hxcRocker said...
Sept. 13, 2010 at 3:18 am
really paints a beautiful picture of the emotion that would be felt on that day. 
 
amicrazyorisitjusteveryoneelse replied...
Sept. 14, 2010 at 9:58 pm
Yeah..... Wrote it way back really... It was for Megan
 
MidnightAngel7 said...
Aug. 29, 2010 at 3:45 pm

A beautiful poem

The poets veil has come off

Deffanitly five stars!

 

(Sorry, I like Haiku's) Love it!

 
amicrazyorisitjusteveryoneelse replied...
Aug. 29, 2010 at 4:35 pm

haha

Thanks for your comment

I really love this poem

again I thank you:)

 
amicrazyorisitjusteveryoneelse replied...
Aug. 29, 2010 at 4:40 pm

your is 6,7,6

it's supposed to be 5,7,5

good try though;)

 
MidnightAngel7 replied...
Aug. 29, 2010 at 7:40 pm
wow, I knew that..I guess thats what happend after watching a three kids under 9 lol
 
amicrazyorisitjusteveryoneelse replied...
Aug. 30, 2010 at 11:03 pm

haha

sorry to correct you:P

 
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