A Wedding

June 1, 2010
amicrazyorisitjusteveryoneelse PLATINUM, Kula, Hawaii
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Favorite Quote:
"Everything you dream is real and everything real is a dream"


I lift off the veil
From my loves beautiful face
How I longed for this



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on Apr. 1 2012 at 5:39 pm
beautifulspirit PLATINUM, Alpharetta, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams.
--Eleanor Roosevelt

Sweet wedding poem~ By the title, I was thinking it would be written from the woman's perspective.

on Apr. 1 2012 at 5:39 pm
beautifulspirit PLATINUM, Alpharetta, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams.
--Eleanor Roosevelt

Sweet wedding poem~ By the title, I was thinking it would be written from the woman's perspective.

on Sep. 14 2010 at 9:58 pm
amicrazyorisitjusteveryoneelse PLATINUM, Kula, Hawaii
48 articles 0 photos 198 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Everything you dream is real and everything real is a dream"

Yeah..... Wrote it way back really... It was for Megan

on Sep. 13 2010 at 3:18 am
hxcRocker DIAMOND, Haiku, Hawaii
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really paints a beautiful picture of the emotion that would be felt on that day. 

on Aug. 30 2010 at 11:03 pm
amicrazyorisitjusteveryoneelse PLATINUM, Kula, Hawaii
48 articles 0 photos 198 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Everything you dream is real and everything real is a dream"

haha

sorry to correct you:P


on Aug. 29 2010 at 7:40 pm
JohnDeereGirl DIAMOND, Westerlo, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"I'd rather be hated for who I am, than loved for who I'm not"
"Somewhere betweeen us talking, you saying I deserve better, and you making me laugh when I wanted to cry, I fell in love with you."

wow, I knew that..I guess thats what happend after watching a three kids under 9 lol

on Aug. 29 2010 at 4:40 pm
amicrazyorisitjusteveryoneelse PLATINUM, Kula, Hawaii
48 articles 0 photos 198 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Everything you dream is real and everything real is a dream"

your is 6,7,6

it's supposed to be 5,7,5

good try though;)


on Aug. 29 2010 at 4:35 pm
amicrazyorisitjusteveryoneelse PLATINUM, Kula, Hawaii
48 articles 0 photos 198 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Everything you dream is real and everything real is a dream"

haha

Thanks for your comment

I really love this poem

again I thank you:)


on Aug. 29 2010 at 3:45 pm
JohnDeereGirl DIAMOND, Westerlo, New York
61 articles 36 photos 216 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I'd rather be hated for who I am, than loved for who I'm not"
"Somewhere betweeen us talking, you saying I deserve better, and you making me laugh when I wanted to cry, I fell in love with you."

A beautiful poem

The poets veil has come off

Deffanitly five stars!

 

(Sorry, I like Haiku's) Love it!



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