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Spirited Spring

The wind whispering.
Spirited horses gallop.
Spring is in the air.





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sleeplessdreamer said...
Jun. 30, 2010 at 10:08 pm

I love short poems that use imagery in as many minimal words as possible. However that is the hardest kind of poetry to write. I don't think the three lines connected in anyway, so the meaning was lost between the lines. (No pun intended.) Kudos for attempting that though. I certainly can't even try to do that.

Check out my work if you ever get the chance. I'm open for you brutal, honest opinion.

 
alanacarlene replied...
Jul. 1, 2010 at 12:41 am

Thank you so much for your honest opinion! I think I like that more than people just saying nice things because they don't want to hurt my feelings or whatever. I guess you'd just have to be me to understand this or conect the lines. Just picture yourself galloping away on your horse with the fresh wind blowing in your face galloping past blooming flowers in the beginning of spring.

And I will definately check out your work.

Thanks again.

 
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