Spirited Spring

May 31, 2010
By alanacarlene DIAMOND, Mexia, Texas
alanacarlene DIAMOND, Mexia, Texas
55 articles 15 photos 592 comments

Favorite Quote:
Silence screams too honestly and loudly.
-Alex (aka GangstaEyes)
Freedom is the freedom to say that two plus two equals four.
-Winston Smith '1984'
Don't go wishin' your life away...
-Daddy S2
"What a drag it was to be limited by reality."


The wind whispering.
Spirited horses gallop.
Spring is in the air.



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on Jul. 1 2010 at 12:41 am
alanacarlene DIAMOND, Mexia, Texas
55 articles 15 photos 592 comments

Favorite Quote:
Silence screams too honestly and loudly.
-Alex (aka GangstaEyes)
Freedom is the freedom to say that two plus two equals four.
-Winston Smith '1984'
Don't go wishin' your life away...
-Daddy S2
"What a drag it was to be limited by reality."

Thank you so much for your honest opinion! I think I like that more than people just saying nice things because they don't want to hurt my feelings or whatever. I guess you'd just have to be me to understand this or conect the lines. Just picture yourself galloping away on your horse with the fresh wind blowing in your face galloping past blooming flowers in the beginning of spring.

And I will definately check out your work.

Thanks again.


on Jun. 30 2010 at 10:08 pm
sleeplessdreamer PLATINUM, Raleigh, North Carolina
30 articles 0 photos 332 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I have always wanted to write in such a way that people say, 'I have always thought that but never found the words for it.'" -anonymous

I love short poems that use imagery in as many minimal words as possible. However that is the hardest kind of poetry to write. I don't think the three lines connected in anyway, so the meaning was lost between the lines. (No pun intended.) Kudos for attempting that though. I certainly can't even try to do that.

Check out my work if you ever get the chance. I'm open for you brutal, honest opinion.



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