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The Narrow River

A narrow river
That decided to break free
Became the ocean



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sbetsThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Aug. 2, 2012 at 7:49 pm:

This is so meaningful! The way you captured a person's growth and made it into a metaphor is amazing. Outstanding work.

Please read, rate, and comment on my poems! Thanks!

 
so_joyThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Sept. 28, 2012 at 1:29 pm :
^that's me. mind checking out some of my work?:)
 
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