The Narrow River

May 18, 2010
A narrow river
That decided to break free
Became the ocean

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sbets said...
Aug. 2, 2012 at 7:49 pm

This is so meaningful! The way you captured a person's growth and made it into a metaphor is amazing. Outstanding work.

Please read, rate, and comment on my poems! Thanks!

so_joy replied...
Sept. 28, 2012 at 1:29 pm
^that's me. mind checking out some of my work?:)
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