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Drowning in your soul

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Not falling in love
But sinking in perfection
Hold me close to you

Drowning in your soul
Your hazel eyes enfold me
Please don’t let me go



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DevinQuin said...
Dec. 11, 2010 at 5:58 pm:
The way you just took something so short and made it sound so beautiful and contain so much meaning is amazing! I am baffled out how you just did that!
 
foreverwelsh replied...
Dec. 14, 2010 at 10:50 am :
thank you so much! getting comments really means a lot to me especially when they're so nice! :D
 
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i.ll_be_fine_899This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jun. 27, 2010 at 11:05 am:
aww that was beautifully said. :) i liked it very much!!
 
foreverwelsh replied...
Jun. 30, 2010 at 10:53 am :
thanks!! glad you liked it :D
 
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