Drowning in your soul

By foreverwelsh, Cardiff, United Kingdom

Not falling in love
But sinking in perfection
Hold me close to you

Drowning in your soul
Your hazel eyes enfold me
Please don’t let me go

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DevinQuin said...
Dec. 11, 2010 at 5:58 pm:

The way you just took something so short and made it sound so beautiful and contain so much meaning is amazing! I am baffled out how you just did that!

foreverwelsh replied...
Dec. 14, 2010 at 10:50 am :

thank you so much! getting comments really means a lot to me especially when they're so nice! :D

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i.ll_be_fine_899 said...
Jun. 27, 2010 at 11:05 am:

aww that was beautifully said. :) i liked it very much!!

foreverwelsh replied...
Jun. 30, 2010 at 10:53 am :

thanks!! glad you liked it :D