Drowning in your soul

May 28, 2010
By foreverwelsh BRONZE, Cardiff, Other
foreverwelsh BRONZE, Cardiff, Other
2 articles 4 photos 32 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Thin, like butter over too much bread" JRR Tolkien


Not falling in love
But sinking in perfection
Hold me close to you

Drowning in your soul
Your hazel eyes enfold me
Please don’t let me go


The author's comments:
We had to write haikus in an English lesson, so I just wrote whatever came into my head. Hope you like it!

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on Dec. 14 2010 at 10:50 am
foreverwelsh BRONZE, Cardiff, Other
2 articles 4 photos 32 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Thin, like butter over too much bread" JRR Tolkien

thank you so much! getting comments really means a lot to me especially when they're so nice! :D

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on Dec. 11 2010 at 5:58 pm
DevinQuin GOLD, Norwalk, Iowa
12 articles 8 photos 14 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If it would be revealed or demonstrated that there is no future state (heaven), my advice to every man, woman, and child would be, as our existence would be in our own power, to take opium." - John Adams

The way you just took something so short and made it sound so beautiful and contain so much meaning is amazing! I am baffled out how you just did that!

on Jun. 30 2010 at 10:53 am
foreverwelsh BRONZE, Cardiff, Other
2 articles 4 photos 32 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Thin, like butter over too much bread" JRR Tolkien

thanks!! glad you liked it :D

on Jun. 27 2010 at 11:05 am
HeatherBee BRONZE, I Live In, Texas
1 article 0 photos 1985 comments

Favorite Quote:
Go on and try to tear me down. I will be rising from the ground, like a skyscraper

Love is louder than the pressure to be perfect

aww that was beautifully said. :) i liked it very much!!




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