Oh young, foolish tree
Rises high above the rest
And yet has no beard
Rises high above the rest
And yet has no beard
A.DreamerThis was great! You have a great humorous writing style!
This made me smile. Hiakus (to me) are the hardest poems to do. They have to have a lot of emotion in just a few short lines in order to make it work. i thought this was beautifully done and the last line was genius. Great job. Nothing but praise for this.
Aww, thanks! It's funny that your comment is longer than my actual poem.
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