Palm Tree

May 23, 2010
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Oh young, foolish tree
Rises high above the rest
And yet has no beard

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A.Dreamer said...
Aug. 19, 2010 at 9:17 pm
This was great! You have a great humorous writing style!
sleeplessdreamer said...
Aug. 17, 2010 at 3:21 pm
This made me smile. Hiakus (to me) are the hardest poems to do. They have to have a lot of emotion in just a few short lines in order to make it work. i thought this was beautifully done and the last line was genius. Great job. Nothing but praise for this.
ArtemisOwlfeather replied...
Aug. 17, 2010 at 3:45 pm
Aww, thanks! It's funny that your comment is longer than my actual poem.
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