Palm Tree

May 23, 2010
By ArtemisOwlfeather SILVER, South Pasadena, California
ArtemisOwlfeather SILVER, South Pasadena, California
5 articles 1 photo 23 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I am evil. I am evil. I am evil. I do not bounce. I am evil."


Oh young, foolish tree
Rises high above the rest
And yet has no beard



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on Aug. 19 2010 at 9:17 pm
Just.A.Dream SILVER, Lake Geneva, Wisconsin
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Part of the J7X team. :)

This was great! You have a great humorous writing style!

on Aug. 17 2010 at 3:45 pm
ArtemisOwlfeather SILVER, South Pasadena, California
5 articles 1 photo 23 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I am evil. I am evil. I am evil. I do not bounce. I am evil."

Aww, thanks! It's funny that your comment is longer than my actual poem.

on Aug. 17 2010 at 3:21 pm
sleeplessdreamer PLATINUM, Raleigh, North Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
"I have always wanted to write in such a way that people say, 'I have always thought that but never found the words for it.'" -anonymous

This made me smile. Hiakus (to me) are the hardest poems to do. They have to have a lot of emotion in just a few short lines in order to make it work. i thought this was beautifully done and the last line was genius. Great job. Nothing but praise for this.


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