When I fly

May 2, 2010
By Nelle PLATINUM, Crewkerne, Other
Nelle PLATINUM, Crewkerne, Other
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Let me fly high, high.
Dappled blue will be the sky,
When I fly high, high.

When I fly high, high;
No bad thoughts will cross my mind,
For I’ll be high, high

For I’ll be high, high:
I’ll not think of you and I,
Not you, when I fly.


The author's comments:
I know it's not brilliant, but I have never done a haiku before and I love the way they are written; so I thought I would give it a go. So here it is- enjoy! :)

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on Aug. 24 2010 at 10:22 am
bound4life4ever PLATINUM, Jamaica, New York
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Favorite Quote:
Never take life seriously. Nobody gets out alive anyway.

omg i love this piece! i really rlated cuz i mostly write love poetry nd i do a lot of hiakus. check out my work when u can plez!   this poem was awesome! keep writing!

on Aug. 16 2010 at 10:34 am
poeticspirit12334 PLATINUM, Groesbeck, Texas
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Wearing a Christian T-shirt, and a cross necklace does NOT make you a Christian. , "For I know the plans I have for you," declares the Lord "They are plans to give you a hope and a future.'' Jeremiah 29:11

this is REALLYYYYYYY good this is one of my favs on the website!! great job!!!!!!!!!! check out my stuff??


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