Who Keeps Me Away From Freedom

April 25, 2010
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Do your chores, says she
Stop making me look bad with
your incompetence.

You need to do this,
you better do that and keep
up your grades on top.

My mother keeps me
always locked out of the world
and far from freedom.

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smiley10507 said...
May 17, 2010 at 9:28 pm
it is true, but i don't want to start any trouble...
BoosflashThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
May 16, 2010 at 8:04 am
this is very nice. i hope it isnt true-if it is you nee to start a riot.  5 stars captain.
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