That's Me

April 19, 2010
I’m taking a breath.
I’m involuntarily taking a breath to live another day.
I’m living another day just to hate it.

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DanceAway This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
May 19, 2010 at 3:54 pm
I like it. It's really simple but still gets the reader thinking. 
...Hopeless... said...
May 18, 2010 at 12:46 pm
I actually quite like this piece.  The message is sad, and the length of the piece actually sort of reinforces that.  Good job!
SUPERMANDwightHoward replied...
May 18, 2010 at 6:57 pm
It always takes me a bit to associate meaning to Haikus but when I do the  message is deep.
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