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You don't understand
I'm here but you don't see me
Don't know what I am



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mary_blue356 said...
May 12, 2010 at 9:40 pm
This is a really good haiku. This one totally relates to me. Especially when I'm in the corner looking at my crush, wondering if he could see me and feel what I feel for him...haha nice job. Keep it up!
 
Anna H. said...
May 12, 2010 at 3:42 pm
THIS IS AMAZING!! and really really really deep.  i agree with it.
 
inspir3d This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
May 12, 2010 at 11:33 am

super deep. didn't waste a syllable!!

hey you should check out my haiku Desperate. I think you would like it

 
treegirl93 said...
May 11, 2010 at 5:53 pm
Reminds me of Ezra Pound. Not a lot of words of it gets the message across.
 
KillerButterflyThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
May 11, 2010 at 3:55 pm
Deep. Very, very deep.
 
Stoner333 said...
May 11, 2010 at 3:20 pm
thanks for agreeing wit me
 
sora replied...
May 11, 2010 at 3:36 pm
no prob buddy ^_^
 
Stoner333 said...
May 11, 2010 at 8:45 am
Dude that was the best 3 line poem ever.
 
sora replied...
May 11, 2010 at 8:52 am
i agree with stoner keep writing!!!
 
Egyptiangirl13 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
May 10, 2010 at 7:09 pm
So much meaning in so little lines
 
DaylightDarkness replied...
May 10, 2010 at 8:58 pm
Wow. It's so impressive what can be done with so few words. This is great.
 
Shahed said...
May 9, 2010 at 2:56 pm

Sometimes short lines are more valuable than a two page poem! I like it!

Check out my work, I want to know your opinion :)

 
imrighthereyouknow said...
May 9, 2010 at 10:26 am
really good, I love how it's short and it anyone who reads it can know what your feeling
 
Nyx.Amaya This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
May 9, 2010 at 12:30 am
Short but you got the heartbreaking message across. I like this. 
 
perfected_11 said...
May 8, 2010 at 11:20 am
it was simple and short and i understood the point. Good work!
 
sam013 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
May 8, 2010 at 10:27 am
thanks everyone!
 
Krista B. said...
May 8, 2010 at 8:18 am
This is so good and well thought out... Eilatan is right; keeping it short and secretive was perfect!
 
Eilatan This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
May 8, 2010 at 7:33 am
This is really powerful. I like the secrecy, good choice of picture as well. 5 stars.
 
WRIT3R4LIF3 said...
May 7, 2010 at 7:54 pm
wow. good job! i know how u feel, defiantly. 5 stars
 
sam013 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
May 7, 2010 at 9:57 pm
thanks. I really like your stuff too :)
 
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