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mary_blue356This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
May 12, 2010 at 9:40 pm:
This is a really good haiku. This one totally relates to me. Especially when I'm in the corner looking at my crush, wondering if he could see me and feel what I feel for him...haha nice job. Keep it up!
 
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Anna H. said...
May 12, 2010 at 3:42 pm:
THIS IS AMAZING!! and really really really deep.  i agree with it.
 
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inspir3d This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
May 12, 2010 at 11:33 am:

super deep. didn't waste a syllable!!

hey you should check out my haiku Desperate. I think you would like it

 
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treegirl93 said...
May 11, 2010 at 5:53 pm:
Reminds me of Ezra Pound. Not a lot of words of it gets the message across.
 
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KillerButterfly said...
May 11, 2010 at 3:55 pm:
Deep. Very, very deep.
 
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Stoner333 said...
May 11, 2010 at 3:20 pm:
thanks for agreeing wit me
 
sora replied...
May 11, 2010 at 3:36 pm :
no prob buddy ^_^
 
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Stoner333 said...
May 11, 2010 at 8:45 am:
Dude that was the best 3 line poem ever.
 
sora replied...
May 11, 2010 at 8:52 am :
i agree with stoner keep writing!!!
 
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Egyptiangirl13 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
May 10, 2010 at 7:09 pm:
So much meaning in so little lines
 
DaylightDarkness replied...
May 10, 2010 at 8:58 pm :
Wow. It's so impressive what can be done with so few words. This is great.
 
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Shahed said...
May 9, 2010 at 2:56 pm:

Sometimes short lines are more valuable than a two page poem! I like it!

Check out my work, I want to know your opinion :)

 
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imrighthereyouknow said...
May 9, 2010 at 10:26 am:
really good, I love how it's short and it anyone who reads it can know what your feeling
 
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Nyx.Amaya This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
May 9, 2010 at 12:30 am:
Short but you got the heartbreaking message across. I like this. 
 
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perfected_11 said...
May 8, 2010 at 11:20 am:
it was simple and short and i understood the point. Good work!
 
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sam013 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
May 8, 2010 at 10:27 am:
thanks everyone!
 
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Krista B. said...
May 8, 2010 at 8:18 am:
This is so good and well thought out... Eilatan is right; keeping it short and secretive was perfect!
 
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Eilatan This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
May 8, 2010 at 7:33 am:
This is really powerful. I like the secrecy, good choice of picture as well. 5 stars.
 
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WRIT3R4LIF3 said...
May 7, 2010 at 7:54 pm:
wow. good job! i know how u feel, defiantly. 5 stars
 
sam013 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
May 7, 2010 at 9:57 pm :
thanks. I really like your stuff too :)
 
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