Hiding Me

April 20, 2010
By sam013 DIAMOND, San Diego, California
sam013 DIAMOND, San Diego, California
63 articles 28 photos 33 comments

You don't understand
I'm here but you don't see me
Don't know what I am



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on May. 12 2010 at 9:40 pm
BloodyMary PLATINUM, N/A, Other
22 articles 8 photos 70 comments

Favorite Quote:
Life is like a box of chocolates; You never know what you are gonna get.

This is a really good haiku. This one totally relates to me. Especially when I'm in the corner looking at my crush, wondering if he could see me and feel what I feel for him...haha nice job. Keep it up!

on May. 12 2010 at 3:42 pm
Anna Halaburt BRONZE, Atlanta, Georgia
2 articles 3 photos 6 comments
THIS IS AMAZING!! and really really really deep.  i agree with it.

inspir3d GOLD said...
on May. 12 2010 at 11:33 am
inspir3d GOLD, Norcross, Georgia
11 articles 2 photos 73 comments

Favorite Quote:
We're all just looking for attention, to be discovered overnight. We're all frustrated by the popular ones that claim the limelight before they fall to pieces. So many of us are stuck under the radar--what makes me different? You decide!

super deep. didn't waste a syllable!!

hey you should check out my haiku Desperate. I think you would like it


on May. 11 2010 at 5:53 pm
treegirl93 BRONZE, San Antonio, Texas
1 article 0 photos 37 comments

Favorite Quote:
Be nice to trees- they'll become books someday.

Reminds me of Ezra Pound. Not a lot of words of it gets the message across.

HelloLove said...
on May. 11 2010 at 3:55 pm
HelloLove, Dexter, Michigan
0 articles 0 photos 68 comments

Favorite Quote:
Twinkle, twinkle, little bat! How I wonder what you're at.
-Hatter
Tut, tut, child! Everything's got a moral, if only you can find it.
-Dutchess

Deep. Very, very deep.

sora said...
on May. 11 2010 at 3:36 pm
no prob buddy ^_^

on May. 11 2010 at 3:20 pm
EchelonZ333 BRONZE, Frankfort, Indiana
4 articles 0 photos 4 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Bowties are cool."-The Eleventh Doctor

thanks for agreeing wit me

sora said...
on May. 11 2010 at 8:52 am
i agree with stoner keep writing!!!

Stoner333 said...
on May. 11 2010 at 8:45 am
Dude that was the best 3 line poem ever.

on May. 10 2010 at 8:58 pm
DaylightDarkness SILVER, Littleton, Colorado
9 articles 0 photos 102 comments

Favorite Quote:
Everyone's crazy. You know why? We all want to be normal. Well, we cant define normal, and, the people you can point at and say, well isn't he/she normal are rare. Doesnt that kind of defeat the pupose of normal? -My Friend

Wow. It's so impressive what can be done with so few words. This is great.

on May. 10 2010 at 7:09 pm
Egyptiangirl13 GOLD, Kansas City, Missouri
14 articles 0 photos 501 comments

Favorite Quote:
\"either write something worth reading or do something worth writing. -Benjamin Franklin

\"If columbus would have turned back, no one would have blamed him. No one would have remembered him either.\"

\"If music be the food of love, play on.\"

So much meaning in so little lines

Shahed GOLD said...
on May. 9 2010 at 2:56 pm
Shahed GOLD, Tulsa, Oklahoma
16 articles 2 photos 350 comments

Favorite Quote:
"People are like tea bags, they don't realize their own strength until they're dropped in hot water "
“People are often unreasonable and self-centered. Forgive them anyway.
If you are kind, people may accuse you of ulterior motives. Be kind anyway."

Sometimes short lines are more valuable than a two page poem! I like it!

Check out my work, I want to know your opinion :)


on May. 9 2010 at 10:26 am
shelterisland GOLD, Montclair, New Jersey
14 articles 0 photos 175 comments

Favorite Quote:
-Biting's excellent. It's like kissing only there's a winner."-Doctor Who, The Tardis

really good, I love how it's short and it anyone who reads it can know what your feeling

on May. 9 2010 at 12:30 am
CammyCalliope GOLD, Georgetown, Other
16 articles 0 photos 3 comments

Favorite Quote:
We are now
part of a garden, that is part of a
landscape, that is part of a world
that no one believes in. (Joshua Beckman)

Short but you got the heartbreaking message across. I like this. 

on May. 8 2010 at 11:20 am
perfected_11 SILVER, Cheverly, Maryland
5 articles 0 photos 23 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Negative thinking limits gods possibilities for us and for others."
-Craig L

it was simple and short and i understood the point. Good work!

sam013 DIAMOND said...
on May. 8 2010 at 10:27 am
sam013 DIAMOND, San Diego, California
63 articles 28 photos 33 comments
thanks everyone!

on May. 8 2010 at 8:18 am
Krista Burnette BRONZE, Hixson, Tennessee
1 article 0 photos 2 comments
This is so good and well thought out... Eilatan is right; keeping it short and secretive was perfect!

Eilatan GOLD said...
on May. 8 2010 at 7:33 am
Eilatan GOLD, Old Greenwich, Connecticut
11 articles 1 photo 307 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Nobody is normal. Everybody in the world is a weirdo freak. Except you, which makes you a weirdo freak."

This is really powerful. I like the secrecy, good choice of picture as well. 5 stars.

sam013 DIAMOND said...
on May. 7 2010 at 9:57 pm
sam013 DIAMOND, San Diego, California
63 articles 28 photos 33 comments
thanks. I really like your stuff too :)

on May. 7 2010 at 7:54 pm
loveisblind GOLD, Tenino, Washington
10 articles 0 photos 71 comments

Favorite Quote:
This world, it ends as you believe it to end; yet it'll live on to the actuall end, where then you admit yourself wrong.


~Me~

wow. good job! i know how u feel, defiantly. 5 stars


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