Run Away

April 9, 2010
Run, run, run away,
From the fears and pain today,
Run away from me,

Sadly mistaken,
For I am not your friend,
But the enemy,

I start the fires,
So I'll warn you just once,
Stay away from me.

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alanacarlene said...
Oct. 31, 2010 at 4:56 pm

Ooooh! I looooove this a lot! :) hehe and the pic is creepy but i love your choice of picture too nice work ;) 

would you mind checkin out some of my poems pleeeease??? thanks :)

BleedingRose replied...
Dec. 9, 2010 at 10:14 am

Thanks, and yes, I love the creepy pic too!

And of course I'll check out ur work.  ;)


alanacarlene replied...
Dec. 10, 2010 at 4:38 pm
Yay! Thanks so much!
Imaginedangerous This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jun. 16, 2010 at 12:34 pm
I like it- you get the point across in very few words. Good job.
BleedingRose replied...
Jun. 16, 2010 at 5:55 pm

Thank-you, Imaginedangerous!  So great to get feedback.  :D


AngelForeverBleedingLove This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Oct. 4, 2010 at 12:17 pm

I like the poem but the picture scares me!! AHH! I had to read the poem and post this really quick so I don't have to look at the picture! CREEEEEPPY!


BleedingRose replied...
Oct. 29, 2010 at 10:08 am

Whoo!  Go CREEPYNESS!  Ya, a picture of broken babies . . . definitely not your thing lolz!


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