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imrighthereyouknow said...
Jun. 26, 2010 at 8:07 am
wow... so much emotion in only 17 syllables!
 
Leona95 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jun. 2, 2010 at 5:01 pm
Wow, that poem made me catch me breath...that was terrific! So deep. Can you look at my work?
 
Boosflash This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
May 12, 2010 at 5:24 pm
this is really good. you sound all catastrophic and cynical and calm at the samt time-like you would like to be saved but you realy dont care either way. very nice. 5 stars captain.
 
possiblylindsey This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Apr. 25, 2010 at 8:47 pm
ouch.  i could practically feel your pain. that is amazing in only 17 syllables, amazing job!
 
Onyx_Gypsy said...
Apr. 25, 2010 at 5:13 am
That is deep.  You just hit the emotion square on in thirteen words.  You're amazing.
 
insaneprincess said...
Apr. 20, 2010 at 2:42 pm

i think this is really good;

 i can really relate to it !

 keep writing !

 
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