Desperate

March 30, 2010
By inspir3d GOLD, Norcross, Georgia
inspir3d GOLD, Norcross, Georgia
11 articles 2 photos 73 comments

Favorite Quote:
We're all just looking for attention, to be discovered overnight. We're all frustrated by the popular ones that claim the limelight before they fall to pieces. So many of us are stuck under the radar--what makes me different? You decide!


I need you like a
Drowning man needs oxygen
Save me from myself



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on Jun. 26 2010 at 8:07 am
shelterisland GOLD, Montclair, New Jersey
14 articles 0 photos 175 comments

Favorite Quote:
-Biting's excellent. It's like kissing only there's a winner."-Doctor Who, The Tardis

wow... so much emotion in only 17 syllables!

on Jun. 2 2010 at 5:01 pm
RosyOptimism DIAMOND, Coronado, California
72 articles 31 photos 57 comments
Wow, that poem made me catch me breath...that was terrific! So deep. Can you look at my work?

on May. 12 2010 at 5:24 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Jacksonville, Florida
54 articles 0 photos 2066 comments

Favorite Quote:
Get, Got, Gotten.

this is really good. you sound all catastrophic and cynical and calm at the samt time-like you would like to be saved but you realy dont care either way. very nice. 5 stars captain.

on Apr. 25 2010 at 8:47 pm
possiblylindsey GOLD, Keller, Texas
12 articles 12 photos 74 comments

Favorite Quote:
"see? if i liked chris drew, id end up like randy. 5 foot 1 and vegetarian. vegetarians arent men." -camden
"what are you grinnin' at?" - mr. martinez
"you just cant recreate stupid." - jacob

ouch.  i could practically feel your pain. that is amazing in only 17 syllables, amazing job!

on Apr. 25 2010 at 5:13 am
Onyx_Gypsy BRONZE, Huntersville, North Carolina
3 articles 7 photos 1 comment
That is deep.  You just hit the emotion square on in thirteen words.  You're amazing.

on Apr. 20 2010 at 2:42 pm
inspire.identity. PLATINUM, Ajax, Other
23 articles 8 photos 98 comments

i think this is really good;

 i can really relate to it !

 keep writing !



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