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I need you like a
Drowning man needs oxygen
Save me from myself





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imrighthereyouknow said...
Jun. 26, 2010 at 8:07 am
wow... so much emotion in only 17 syllables!
 
Leona95 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jun. 2, 2010 at 5:01 pm
Wow, that poem made me catch me breath...that was terrific! So deep. Can you look at my work?
 
BoosflashThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
May 12, 2010 at 5:24 pm
this is really good. you sound all catastrophic and cynical and calm at the samt time-like you would like to be saved but you realy dont care either way. very nice. 5 stars captain.
 
possiblylindsey This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Apr. 25, 2010 at 8:47 pm
ouch.  i could practically feel your pain. that is amazing in only 17 syllables, amazing job!
 
Onyx_Gypsy said...
Apr. 25, 2010 at 5:13 am
That is deep.  You just hit the emotion square on in thirteen words.  You're amazing.
 
insaneprincess said...
Apr. 20, 2010 at 2:42 pm

i think this is really good;

 i can really relate to it !

 keep writing !

 
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