Report Abuse Home > Poetry > Haiku > Desperate Desperate By inspir3d, Norcross, GA More by this author Drowning man needs oxygen Save me from myself « Previous article More by this author Next article » Join the Discussion This article has 6 comments. Post your own! Report abuse imrighthereyouknow said... Jun. 26, 2010 at 8:07 am: wow... so much emotion in only 17 syllables! Report abuse Leona95 said... Jun. 2, 2010 at 5:01 pm: Wow, that poem made me catch me breath...that was terrific! So deep. Can you look at my work? Report abuse Boosflash said... May 12, 2010 at 5:24 pm: this is really good. you sound all catastrophic and cynical and calm at the samt time-like you would like to be saved but you realy dont care either way. very nice. 5 stars captain. Report abuse possiblylindsey said... Apr. 25, 2010 at 8:47 pm: ouch. i could practically feel your pain. that is amazing in only 17 syllables, amazing job! Report abuse Onyx_Gypsy said... Apr. 25, 2010 at 5:13 am: That is deep. You just hit the emotion square on in thirteen words. You're amazing. Report abuse insaneprincess said... Apr. 20, 2010 at 2:42 pm: i think this is really good; i can really relate to it ! keep writing !