Molten Fire

March 10, 2010
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Molten fire pours
From land's open wounds like bright
Hot blood in the night.





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BoosflashThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Apr. 27, 2010 at 10:34 pm
see, you have a thing for murdering poetry(in a good way):).  "pours from lands open wounds"-thats why I think you should save the world. you have a very interesting and poetic way of paraphrasing possible death by means of volcanic eruption:)
 
Wolfayne replied...
May 3, 2010 at 12:38 pm

You have a strange way of interpreting poetry....

But thanks anyway!

 
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