Resting Water

March 23, 2010
By AshleyEWong PLATINUM, Brooklyn, New York
AshleyEWong PLATINUM, Brooklyn, New York
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On the surface of
The soft, delicate petals
Beads of water rest


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on Apr. 21 2010 at 4:16 pm
AshleyEWong PLATINUM, Brooklyn, New York
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Thank you, since this was a haiku, I figured that speaking about nature was appropriate. The nuances in nature are really important, and worth observing.

on Apr. 18 2010 at 2:26 pm
omg. i like totally loved this poem. In only a lines, i can get a perfect image if this poem.




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