Resting Water

On the surface of
The soft, delicate petals
Beads of water rest





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seniorbobgirl said...
Apr. 18, 2010 at 2:26 pm
omg. i like totally loved this poem. In only a lines, i can get a perfect image if this poem.
 
Ericax3 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Apr. 21, 2010 at 4:16 pm
Thank you, since this was a haiku, I figured that speaking about nature was appropriate. The nuances in nature are really important, and worth observing.
 
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