Night

March 22, 2010
By Luna1 SILVER, Bethlehem, Pennsylvania
Luna1 SILVER, Bethlehem, Pennsylvania
9 articles 0 photos 109 comments

Favorite Quote:
Bite Me


The night I embrace
Its darkness will accept me
The sun I can't face


The author's comments:
Again don't blame if this sucks. I'm still considered a Newbee>:)

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on Feb. 27 2011 at 5:16 pm
readaholic PLATINUM, Tomahawk, Wisconsin
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Favorite Quote:
I'd rather fail because I fell on my own face than fall because someone tripped me up
~Jhonen Vasquez

Its a nice bite-sized poem :)  Really has some good wordplay with just 17 sylables

Luna1 SILVER said...
on Oct. 23 2010 at 7:15 pm
Luna1 SILVER, Bethlehem, Pennsylvania
9 articles 0 photos 109 comments

Favorite Quote:
Bite Me

Thanks Nice to know someone actually read this.

Lilya1 SILVER said...
on Oct. 8 2010 at 4:08 pm
Lilya1 SILVER, Canfield, Ohio
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*like (sorry!)

Lilya1 SILVER said...
on Oct. 8 2010 at 4:07 pm
Lilya1 SILVER, Canfield, Ohio
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This is a really good short poem. I feel lik you can really get a strong idea of the emotions behind it. Very well done!


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