March 22, 2010
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The night I embrace
Its darkness will accept me
The sun I can't face

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readaholic This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Feb. 27, 2011 at 5:16 pm
Its a nice bite-sized poem :)  Really has some good wordplay with just 17 sylables
Luna1 said...
Oct. 23, 2010 at 7:15 pm
Thanks Nice to know someone actually read this.
Boomerlily3 said...
Oct. 8, 2010 at 4:07 pm
This is a really good short poem. I feel lik you can really get a strong idea of the emotions behind it. Very well done!
Boomerlily3 replied...
Oct. 8, 2010 at 4:08 pm
*like (sorry!)
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