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We strode along the
beach, our deep prints marking love,
but then, The Wave came.

This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. This piece has been published in Teen Ink’s monthly print magazine.





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ChrisJThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Mar. 2, 2013 at 1:41 pm:
Good story with good execution, great job!
 
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*beautiful*spirit*This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Dec. 10, 2011 at 3:12 pm:

Sad, but describes some of the heartbreaks of love. Good job!

 

 
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NEVER_Perfect said...
Jul. 14, 2011 at 12:34 pm:
This is GREAT because it makes me want to know how you feel about that, what does that mean to you? To want MORE, means a poem is that good .
 
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IamtheshyStargirlThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jun. 7, 2011 at 12:19 pm:
Oh wow. This is absolutely gorgeous, gorgeous, gorgeous. Freaking amazing job, Pressedlee!!!!
 
mokona replied...
Jun. 22, 2011 at 7:36 pm :

Really nice. You manage give out a deep meaning in three lines. That's what I love about haikus.

Big waves always come

it is if the print was deep

enough to stay there

 
mokona replied...
Jun. 22, 2011 at 7:37 pm :
opps meant for the author not IamtheshyStargirl. Sorry
 
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mcnwritingsoul said...
Mar. 4, 2011 at 6:08 am:

 

luv it!!! would you mind commenting/rating my poems? im rlly desperate for feedback.....plz comment and rate them...tnx!!!

 
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timeformetofly7 said...
Dec. 21, 2010 at 11:17 pm:
oh, that was deep, man. Good job!! :)
 
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CoolBreeze This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Dec. 21, 2010 at 12:32 pm:
Wow you are talented . Would you mind checking some of my work out?
 
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BleedingRose said...
Nov. 12, 2010 at 10:01 am:

It's cute yet so deep at the same time . . . I love the double meaning, very clever!  Great work!

Would you mind checking out some of my articles?  Thx!  :D

-Rose

 
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la chichi said...
Oct. 5, 2010 at 7:27 am:

awwwww!!*

that's so sad =(

but still cute...

I love it!!*

 
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horsegirl27 said...
Sept. 16, 2010 at 1:07 pm:
short, sad, but from it i can tel ur talented! good job!
 
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