Prints in the Sand MAG

March 15, 2010
By Pressedlee SILVER, Saint Peters, Missouri
Pressedlee SILVER, Saint Peters, Missouri
8 articles 0 photos 1 comment

Favorite Quote:
"Daily planners never worked for me. I could never remember to write what I needed to remember."


We strode along the
beach, our deep prints marking love,
but then, The Wave came.



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on Mar. 2 2013 at 1:41 pm
ChrisJ PLATINUM, Rochester, New York
24 articles 15 photos 289 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Man must evolve for all human conflict a method which rejects revenge, aggression and retaliation. The foundation of such a method is love.”
- Martin Luther King Jr.

Good story with good execution, great job!

on Dec. 10 2011 at 3:12 pm
beautifulspirit PLATINUM, Alpharetta, Georgia
35 articles 0 photos 1401 comments

Favorite Quote:
The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams.
--Eleanor Roosevelt

Sad, but describes some of the heartbreaks of love. Good job!

 


on Jul. 14 2011 at 12:34 pm
NEVER_Perfect SILVER, Brooklyn, New York
6 articles 0 photos 4 comments

Favorite Quote:
"It Is What It Is"

This is GREAT because it makes me want to know how you feel about that, what does that mean to you? To want MORE, means a poem is that good .

mokona BRONZE said...
on Jun. 22 2011 at 7:37 pm
mokona BRONZE, Yelm, Washington
3 articles 0 photos 4 comments
opps meant for the author not IamtheshyStargirl. Sorry

mokona BRONZE said...
on Jun. 22 2011 at 7:36 pm
mokona BRONZE, Yelm, Washington
3 articles 0 photos 4 comments

Really nice. You manage give out a deep meaning in three lines. That's what I love about haikus.

Big waves always come

it is if the print was deep

enough to stay there


on Jun. 7 2011 at 12:19 pm
IamtheshyStargirl PLATINUM, Lothlorien, Utah
44 articles 16 photos 2216 comments

Favorite Quote:
Boredom instigates extreme creativity.
~Amoniel

"Bowing gratefully to all of my subjects, 'thank you. Thank you. The pleasure is mine." Nah, I'm just kidding. We're all kings together.'"
~Thesilentraven

Oh wow. This is absolutely gorgeous, gorgeous, gorgeous. Freaking amazing job, Pressedlee!!!!

on Mar. 4 2011 at 6:08 am
mcnwritingsoul SILVER, Fairfield, Connecticut
8 articles 0 photos 24 comments

Favorite Quote:
"They can't scare me, if I scare them first." -Lady Gaga
&
"I remember watching the mascara tears flood the ivories and I thought, "It's OK to be sad." I've been trained to love my darkness." -Lady Gaga

 

luv it!!! would you mind commenting/rating my poems? im rlly desperate for feedback.....plz comment and rate them...tnx!!!


on Dec. 21 2010 at 11:17 pm
HeatherBee BRONZE, I Live In, Texas
1 article 0 photos 1985 comments

Favorite Quote:
Go on and try to tear me down. I will be rising from the ground, like a skyscraper

Love is louder than the pressure to be perfect

oh, that was deep, man. Good job!! :)

on Dec. 21 2010 at 12:32 pm
CoolBreeze PLATINUM, Winnemucca, Nevada
21 articles 0 photos 36 comments

Favorite Quote:
The fear of death follows from the fear of life. A man who lives fully is prepared to die at any time. ~Mark Twain

Wow you are talented . Would you mind checking some of my work out?

on Nov. 12 2010 at 10:01 am
BleedingRose PLATINUM, Frederic, Wisconsin
33 articles 1 photo 378 comments

Favorite Quote:
*The darkness holds infinite possibilities.

(mine)

It's cute yet so deep at the same time . . . I love the double meaning, very clever!  Great work!

Would you mind checking out some of my articles?  Thx!  :D

-Rose


la chichi said...
on Oct. 5 2010 at 7:27 am

awwwww!!*

that's so sad =(

but still cute...

I love it!!*


on Sep. 16 2010 at 1:07 pm
horsegirl27 GOLD, Los Angeles, California
11 articles 5 photos 129 comments

Favorite Quote:
A dog comes when called; a cat takes a message and gets back to you

short, sad, but from it i can tel ur talented! good job!


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