Prints in the Sand MAG

March 15, 2010
By Pressedlee SILVER, Saint Peters, Missouri
Pressedlee SILVER, Saint Peters, Missouri
8 articles 0 photos 1 comment

Favorite Quote:
"Daily planners never worked for me. I could never remember to write what I needed to remember."

We strode along the
beach, our deep prints marking love,
but then, The Wave came.

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on Mar. 2 2013 at 1:41 pm
ChrisJ PLATINUM, Rochester, New York
24 articles 15 photos 289 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Man must evolve for all human conflict a method which rejects revenge, aggression and retaliation. The foundation of such a method is love.”
- Martin Luther King Jr.

Good story with good execution, great job!

on Dec. 10 2011 at 3:12 pm
beautifulspirit PLATINUM, Alpharetta, Georgia
35 articles 0 photos 1401 comments

Favorite Quote:
The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams.
--Eleanor Roosevelt

Sad, but describes some of the heartbreaks of love. Good job!


on Jul. 14 2011 at 12:34 pm
NEVER_Perfect SILVER, Brooklyn, New York
6 articles 0 photos 4 comments

Favorite Quote:
"It Is What It Is"

This is GREAT because it makes me want to know how you feel about that, what does that mean to you? To want MORE, means a poem is that good .

mokona BRONZE said...
on Jun. 22 2011 at 7:37 pm
mokona BRONZE, Yelm, Washington
3 articles 0 photos 4 comments
opps meant for the author not IamtheshyStargirl. Sorry

mokona BRONZE said...
on Jun. 22 2011 at 7:36 pm
mokona BRONZE, Yelm, Washington
3 articles 0 photos 4 comments

Really nice. You manage give out a deep meaning in three lines. That's what I love about haikus.

Big waves always come

it is if the print was deep

enough to stay there

on Jun. 7 2011 at 12:19 pm
IamtheshyStargirl PLATINUM, Lothlorien, Utah
44 articles 16 photos 2216 comments

Favorite Quote:
Boredom instigates extreme creativity.

"Bowing gratefully to all of my subjects, 'thank you. Thank you. The pleasure is mine." Nah, I'm just kidding. We're all kings together.'"

Oh wow. This is absolutely gorgeous, gorgeous, gorgeous. Freaking amazing job, Pressedlee!!!!

on Mar. 4 2011 at 6:08 am
mcnwritingsoul SILVER, Fairfield, Connecticut
8 articles 0 photos 24 comments

Favorite Quote:
"They can't scare me, if I scare them first." -Lady Gaga
"I remember watching the mascara tears flood the ivories and I thought, "It's OK to be sad." I've been trained to love my darkness." -Lady Gaga


luv it!!! would you mind commenting/rating my poems? im rlly desperate for feedback.....plz comment and rate them...tnx!!!

on Dec. 21 2010 at 11:17 pm
HeatherBee BRONZE, I Live In, Texas
1 article 0 photos 1985 comments

Favorite Quote:
Go on and try to tear me down. I will be rising from the ground, like a skyscraper

Love is louder than the pressure to be perfect

oh, that was deep, man. Good job!! :)

on Dec. 21 2010 at 12:32 pm
CoolBreeze PLATINUM, Winnemucca, Nevada
21 articles 0 photos 36 comments

Favorite Quote:
The fear of death follows from the fear of life. A man who lives fully is prepared to die at any time. ~Mark Twain

Wow you are talented . Would you mind checking some of my work out?

on Nov. 12 2010 at 10:01 am
BleedingRose PLATINUM, Frederic, Wisconsin
33 articles 1 photo 378 comments

Favorite Quote:
*The darkness holds infinite possibilities.


It's cute yet so deep at the same time . . . I love the double meaning, very clever!  Great work!

Would you mind checking out some of my articles?  Thx!  :D


la chichi said...
on Oct. 5 2010 at 7:27 am


that's so sad =(

but still cute...

I love it!!*

on Sep. 16 2010 at 1:07 pm
horsegirl27 GOLD, Los Angeles, California
11 articles 5 photos 129 comments

Favorite Quote:
A dog comes when called; a cat takes a message and gets back to you

short, sad, but from it i can tel ur talented! good job!

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