March 15, 2010
By Michaela_Touch GOLD, Lake Charles, Louisiana
Michaela_Touch GOLD, Lake Charles, Louisiana
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Favorite Quote:
God's got you on His potter's wheel. Jeremiah chapter 18.

Deserted deserts
dry and Cracked, no water
nothing here or there.

The author's comments:
I was lost at one time and I didn't know where to go or what to do. I felt like I was in an endless desert and it scared me.

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on Jul. 11 2010 at 2:53 pm
celloizmylife PLATINUM, Atlanta, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
Around here, however, we don't look backwards for very long.
We keep moving forward, opening up new doors and doing new things, because we're curious.....And curiosity keeps leading us down new paths.
-Walt Disney

Hmm... It seemed to me that Black and White, Broken, Dying, and Lost could all have been put together in one poem and it still would have made sense. They were all very good, I just thought it could have been a little more enticing together as one poem, with four stanzas. A bunch of haikus together, one haiku per stanza, is still a haiku. Great job and keep writing!

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