Lost...

March 15, 2010
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Deserted deserts
dry and Cracked, no water
nothing here or there.





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celloizmylife said...
Jul. 11, 2010 at 2:53 pm
Hmm... It seemed to me that Black and White, Broken, Dying, and Lost could all have been put together in one poem and it still would have made sense. They were all very good, I just thought it could have been a little more enticing together as one poem, with four stanzas. A bunch of haikus together, one haiku per stanza, is still a haiku. Great job and keep writing!
 
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