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Cedar Point Beach

Summer sun is hot
Water brings a cool relief
Sand between my toes




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Hippie_Runner said...
Apr. 5, 2010 at 6:19 pm:

nice haiku! it actually lets me imagine the beach even though it is a short poem!

 

 
Sarbear This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Apr. 5, 2010 at 6:26 pm :
thank you!! it had to be short though!!
 
BleedingRose replied...
Apr. 7, 2010 at 10:50 am :

I just got back from the beach, lolz!  Great haiku, mind commenting on some of mine?  Thx!

-Rose

 
Sarbear replied...
Apr. 7, 2010 at 6:49 pm :

of course i will check out your stuff...

Thanks for commenting!!

 
BleedingRose replied...
Apr. 11, 2010 at 9:06 am :

and btw, it doesnt have to be short.  you can do multiple verses, like

5

7

 

and then

5

7

5

get it?

 
Sarbear This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Apr. 13, 2010 at 6:18 pm :

thank you! i will try to write one that's longer. ill let you know if i do.

:)

 
BleedingRose replied...
Apr. 15, 2010 at 10:16 pm :

thanks, i'd love to read it and comment when you do!

-rose

 
Sarbear This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
May 17, 2010 at 3:00 pm :
ok, i'll let you know... i'm working on one right now :)
 
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