Cedar Point Beach

March 15, 2010
By Sarbear GOLD, Milan, Ohio
Sarbear GOLD, Milan, Ohio
10 articles 4 photos 489 comments

Favorite Quote:
--Before you criticize someone, you should walk a mile in their shoes. That way, when you criticize them, you're a mile away from them and you have their shoes.
--When life gives you lemons, squirt them in people's eyes.


Summer sun is hot
Water brings a cool relief
Sand between my toes



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Sarbear GOLD said...
on May. 17 2010 at 3:00 pm
Sarbear GOLD, Milan, Ohio
10 articles 4 photos 489 comments

Favorite Quote:
--Before you criticize someone, you should walk a mile in their shoes. That way, when you criticize them, you're a mile away from them and you have their shoes.
--When life gives you lemons, squirt them in people's eyes.

ok, i'll let you know... i'm working on one right now :)

on Apr. 15 2010 at 10:16 pm
BleedingRose PLATINUM, Frederic, Wisconsin
33 articles 1 photo 378 comments

Favorite Quote:
*The darkness holds infinite possibilities.

(mine)

thanks, i'd love to read it and comment when you do!

-rose


Sarbear GOLD said...
on Apr. 13 2010 at 6:18 pm
Sarbear GOLD, Milan, Ohio
10 articles 4 photos 489 comments

Favorite Quote:
--Before you criticize someone, you should walk a mile in their shoes. That way, when you criticize them, you're a mile away from them and you have their shoes.
--When life gives you lemons, squirt them in people's eyes.

thank you! i will try to write one that's longer. ill let you know if i do.

:)


on Apr. 11 2010 at 9:06 am
BleedingRose PLATINUM, Frederic, Wisconsin
33 articles 1 photo 378 comments

Favorite Quote:
*The darkness holds infinite possibilities.

(mine)

and btw, it doesnt have to be short.  you can do multiple verses, like

5

7

 

and then

5

7

5

get it?


Sarbear said...
on Apr. 7 2010 at 6:49 pm

of course i will check out your stuff...

Thanks for commenting!!


on Apr. 7 2010 at 10:50 am
BleedingRose PLATINUM, Frederic, Wisconsin
33 articles 1 photo 378 comments

Favorite Quote:
*The darkness holds infinite possibilities.

(mine)

I just got back from the beach, lolz!  Great haiku, mind commenting on some of mine?  Thx!

-Rose


Sarbear GOLD said...
on Apr. 5 2010 at 6:26 pm
Sarbear GOLD, Milan, Ohio
10 articles 4 photos 489 comments

Favorite Quote:
--Before you criticize someone, you should walk a mile in their shoes. That way, when you criticize them, you're a mile away from them and you have their shoes.
--When life gives you lemons, squirt them in people's eyes.

thank you!! it had to be short though!!

on Apr. 5 2010 at 6:19 pm
HappySappy SILVER, Berlin Heights, Ohio
6 articles 0 photos 34 comments

Favorite Quote:
Courage is the magic that turns dreams into reality.

An eye for an eye makes the whole world go blind.

nice haiku! it actually lets me imagine the beach even though it is a short poem!

 



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