Frigid Melody

March 19, 2010
By LiquidSky PLATINUM, Libby, Montana
LiquidSky PLATINUM, Libby, Montana
20 articles 2 photos 23 comments

Favorite Quote:
Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance.
-Carl Sandberg


Music is the air,
No one may know I am ice.
Frozen treble notes.

Singing to the moon.
Dawn hears my song, hides away.
I see stars again.

Sounds swirl the ocean.
Harmonies dance on my arm.
It is cold ouside.

Then I hear myself,
I shiver and run to heat.
Because snow stops sound.


The author's comments:
Chain Haiku...

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on Apr. 12 2010 at 4:17 pm
LiquidSky PLATINUM, Libby, Montana
20 articles 2 photos 23 comments

Favorite Quote:
Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance.
-Carl Sandberg

Thanks :) ...

on Apr. 11 2010 at 9:02 am
BleedingRose PLATINUM, Frederic, Wisconsin
33 articles 1 photo 378 comments

Favorite Quote:
*The darkness holds infinite possibilities.

(mine)

And great pic choice, BTW!

on Apr. 8 2010 at 3:44 pm
LiquidSky PLATINUM, Libby, Montana
20 articles 2 photos 23 comments

Favorite Quote:
Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance.
-Carl Sandberg

thank you so much, I'll check out your stuff :)

on Apr. 8 2010 at 11:00 am
BleedingRose PLATINUM, Frederic, Wisconsin
33 articles 1 photo 378 comments

Favorite Quote:
*The darkness holds infinite possibilities.

(mine)

OMG, I really love this!  You're super talented, great job!  This is one of the best haikus I've ever read.  ;)  Mind commenting on some of my work?  You might like 'Book Of Flowers."  Thx!  And keep writing!

-Rose



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