Frigid Melody

Music is the air,
No one may know I am ice.
Frozen treble notes.

Singing to the moon.
Dawn hears my song, hides away.
I see stars again.

Sounds swirl the ocean.
Harmonies dance on my arm.
It is cold ouside.

Then I hear myself,
I shiver and run to heat.
Because snow stops sound.





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BleedingRose said...
Apr. 8, 2010 at 11:00 am

OMG, I really love this!  You're super talented, great job!  This is one of the best haikus I've ever read.  ;)  Mind commenting on some of my work?  You might like 'Book Of Flowers."  Thx!  And keep writing!

-Rose

 
Liquid_Sky This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Apr. 8, 2010 at 3:44 pm
thank you so much, I'll check out your stuff :)
 
BleedingRose replied...
Apr. 11, 2010 at 9:02 am
And great pic choice, BTW!
 
Liquid_Sky This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Apr. 12, 2010 at 4:17 pm
Thanks :) ...
 
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