March 17, 2010
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Too good to be true
just hopelessly entranced
you're just too perfect

Everything complete
I can't believe you are here,
with me, holding me

Skin; alabaster
white, smoother than any velvet
I have ever felt

Hair; lovely shade of
jet black, an adorable
mess, just like you boy

Eyes; incredible
hue of ebony, holding
my too eager gaze

I know who you really are
girls all around fall for the
facade I detest

They think you are just
the perfect one, always there;
skin, hair, eyes, you bet

Guess they can't help it
The stunning gaze you can hold
is part of the act

The entirety
is all to great, you have learned;
it's just too perfect

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invisible13 said...
May 10, 2010 at 8:13 am
i have been reading your poems lately, and every one is better than the last. i think i liked this one because i really have felt that way, not really the skeptical one as much as the one falling for him. then the inevitable happened... of course i got over him. i've fallen for some one else and he is faaaaaaar from perfect.  sorry to like, be laying out my heart while i'm supposed to be criticizing you.  i really loved the poem. it was amazing. thnx for writing it!!!
xBaByGiRrL22x replied...
May 11, 2010 at 6:21 pm
hahaa thx u so much 4 ur commentz!! they really do mean alott. really, im just glad u could relate so well. this piece is based on personal experience, & i used it alot 2 help get over a guy. thx again 4 takin the time 2 read/comment:))
invisible13 replied...
May 14, 2010 at 7:17 am

no prob. i really liked it so it was worth the time to read and comment on.  thx again 4 writing it


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