Spring is Near

March 2, 2010
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Winter is over.
The season of spring is near.
With spring comes beauty.

Flowers show, trees blow.
The sun shines on everyone.
Children run for fun.

Rain is falling down,
Keeping flowers beautiful.
Everyone loves spring.





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BleedingRose said...
Mar. 16, 2010 at 11:02 am
Yes, this is a very used topic, but not all poems are good. However, this one is! I liked it a lot, very good job! You should add a creative twist when you do things like this, it would really improve your work! 5 stars! Mind commenting on some of my work? Thx!
-Rose
 
thetiedyecrayon said...
Mar. 9, 2010 at 6:54 pm
I think that you used great adjectives and I really got a picture in my head, but I think that this is a topic that everybody writes about. I know this could be made better with the right editing!
 
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