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Clear Beauty
March 2, 2010
crystal shinging wings,
butterfiles dance around you,
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BleedingRose PLATINUM said...
on Mar. 27 2010 at 7:37 pm
no prob! keep writing, don't b afraid to get creative with it!
-Rose
BleedingRose said...
on Mar. 17 2010 at 7:39 pm
I mean you can add another stanza. I know this is a haiku, and it's 5/7/5. But you can make two 5/7/5's, (or more) just space them! I do it all the time, and so do a lot of other people. Just trying to help. :) And thx!
Syren said...
on Mar. 17 2010 at 6:16 pm
thanx but can't add a verse because of the type of poem it is but thats a good idea thou and sure i'll take a look :D
BleedingRose PLATINUM said...
on Mar. 16 2010 at 11:00 am
I liked this, but I think you should add another verse to it. Put more into it, Good job, though. Mind checking out some of my stuff and commenting? Thx!
-Rose
-Rose
APoetAtHeart GOLD said...
on Mar. 10 2010 at 10:19 am
very nice........
