Clear Beauty

March 2, 2010
By Syren SILVER, Wellington, Florida
Syren SILVER, Wellington, Florida
7 articles 0 photos 3 comments

Favorite Quote:
" Suddenly she understood! She sees it in the eyes infront of her- This is the very moment she realizes that she is close to the killer."
Close to a Killer by MArsha Qualey


crystal shinging wings,
butterfiles dance around you,
shimmering waters

The author's comments:
this helps alot with meditation

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on Mar. 27 2010 at 7:37 pm
BleedingRose PLATINUM, Frederic, Wisconsin
33 articles 1 photo 378 comments

Favorite Quote:
*The darkness holds infinite possibilities.

(mine)

no prob!  keep writing, don't b afraid to get creative with it!

-Rose


Syren SILVER said...
on Mar. 25 2010 at 9:06 pm
Syren SILVER, Wellington, Florida
7 articles 0 photos 3 comments

Favorite Quote:
" Suddenly she understood! She sees it in the eyes infront of her- This is the very moment she realizes that she is close to the killer."
Close to a Killer by MArsha Qualey

oooohhh cool never thought of that thanx :D

BleedingRose said...
on Mar. 17 2010 at 7:39 pm
I mean you can add another stanza. I know this is a haiku, and it's 5/7/5. But you can make two 5/7/5's, (or more) just space them! I do it all the time, and so do a lot of other people. Just trying to help. :) And thx!

Syren SILVER said...
on Mar. 17 2010 at 6:18 pm
Syren SILVER, Wellington, Florida
7 articles 0 photos 3 comments

Favorite Quote:
" Suddenly she understood! She sees it in the eyes infront of her- This is the very moment she realizes that she is close to the killer."
Close to a Killer by MArsha Qualey

whats with the .....?? haha and thanx

Syren said...
on Mar. 17 2010 at 6:16 pm
thanx but can't add a verse because of the type of poem it is but thats a good idea thou and sure i'll take a look :D

on Mar. 16 2010 at 11:00 am
BleedingRose PLATINUM, Frederic, Wisconsin
33 articles 1 photo 378 comments

Favorite Quote:
*The darkness holds infinite possibilities.

(mine)

I liked this, but I think you should add another verse to it. Put more into it, Good job, though. Mind checking out some of my stuff and commenting? Thx!

-Rose

on Mar. 10 2010 at 10:19 am
APoetAtHeart GOLD, Lyman, Maine
13 articles 0 photos 20 comments

Favorite Quote:
" I am, Who I Am, But WHY I Am,Who I Am, Is What Confuses Me." - By Me

very nice........


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