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Haiku

February 11, 2010
By SilverDancer2991 SILVER, Seattle, Washington
SilverDancer2991 SILVER, Seattle, Washington
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Favorite Quote:
"Burn me once shame on you, burn me twice shame on me, burn me thrice, I'm a f***ing idiot"
"Beneath the skin man is all the same, and I for one would be willing to skin every man to prove it"


You are always there
Even when I don’t want you
You are my sister

I apologize
I lost your phone number
Write it down for me?


The author's comments:
These are four random haiku that aren't related to each other.

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on Apr. 14 2010 at 9:36 am
SilverDancer2991 SILVER, Seattle, Washington
8 articles 0 photos 6 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Burn me once shame on you, burn me twice shame on me, burn me thrice, I'm a f***ing idiot"
"Beneath the skin man is all the same, and I for one would be willing to skin every man to prove it"

These didn't come out the way I typed them. There were two others that made more sense. I can't remove this peice but I just wanted to say that it's not what I wanted to post.

on Feb. 25 2010 at 5:48 pm
TheBerkeleyBear BRONZE, Los Altos, California
3 articles 0 photos 19 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Never put off until tomorrow what you can do the day after tomorrow."

usually haikus are supposed to have a deeper meaning, give you a sens of emotion, or start your imagination. Sorry, but I don't really like your haikus.

on Feb. 25 2010 at 10:32 am
SilverDancer2991 SILVER, Seattle, Washington
8 articles 0 photos 6 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Burn me once shame on you, burn me twice shame on me, burn me thrice, I'm a f***ing idiot"
"Beneath the skin man is all the same, and I for one would be willing to skin every man to prove it"

One is about my best friend who for some reason enjoys being there when I don't want her... One is about losing a guys phone number, they are just random haikus

on Feb. 24 2010 at 11:26 pm
TheBerkeleyBear BRONZE, Los Altos, California
3 articles 0 photos 19 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Never put off until tomorrow what you can do the day after tomorrow."

What was the meaning of them? I don't see it.