"Bed" Scare

February 16, 2010
By jennam8 GOLD, Quakertown, Pennsylvania
jennam8 GOLD, Quakertown, Pennsylvania
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My first dream of you
The nightmare of your gravestone
But only a dream

Second dream of you
Nightmare of another girl
But only a dream

My first dream of you
Being awakened with tears
Comfort from your love

Second dream of you
Being awakened with tears
But sadly alone


The author's comments:
I recently had 2 bad dreams about my boyfriend. The first one was about him dying and I woke up crying, but he was there in the morning, comforting me. The second dream was about losing him to another girl, which made me wake up crying, but I felt more sad because he wasn't there at the time to comfort me again.

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jennam8 GOLD said...
on Mar. 2 2010 at 3:14 pm
jennam8 GOLD, Quakertown, Pennsylvania
12 articles 27 photos 56 comments
Thank you :)

Emmyd said...
on Feb. 26 2010 at 8:18 am
Emmyd, Pawtucket, Rhode Island
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o that's good to hear well keep up the gret writing

jennam8 GOLD said...
on Feb. 25 2010 at 10:32 am
jennam8 GOLD, Quakertown, Pennsylvania
12 articles 27 photos 56 comments
haha thank you :) no he didn't cheat on me and i don't think he will. It was just a scary dream of him being with another girl :P

Emmyd said...
on Feb. 25 2010 at 9:51 am
Emmyd, Pawtucket, Rhode Island
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can i ask a question- does this poem imply that ur bf cheated on u that night or u r just worried that he is going to? i love the poem though-i felt fo u :) keep writing


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