I just see red

February 9, 2010
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Sun rests on my lids
warm, enchanting, glowing
but i just see red

Sun tickles my feet
playing, laughing, smiling,
but I just see red

Sun tries to warm me
I try to open my eyes
Now I see my life

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SamiLynn said...
Sept. 12, 2010 at 10:24 pm
Short, sweet, simple. I loved it :)
lola.loves.stars said...
Sept. 5, 2010 at 10:24 pm
Great Job, isee red also :))
Supernova7 said...
Jun. 30, 2010 at 8:26 pm
this was perfect it made me smile at the thought of waking up with the sun coming in:) could you comment on my work?
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