Heartbreak

February 12, 2010
By Bobbi PLATINUM, Terry, Mississippi
Bobbi PLATINUM, Terry, Mississippi
39 articles 1 photo 46 comments

The tears are falling,
My heart is torn in pieces,
Confuse, I cry more

This is not one of my best haiku's but it was one of my first.



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Bobbi PLATINUM said...
on Jun. 3 2010 at 11:35 am
Bobbi PLATINUM, Terry, Mississippi
39 articles 1 photo 46 comments
thank you i forgot the d on the end of confused

on Jun. 3 2010 at 11:02 am
Kumanga DIAMOND, Bethel, Alaska
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Favorite Quote:
Always Accept nd love urself for who u are!

ehh i like this on! i like Hikus! or however they spell it ^_^. I'm jus lookn arond tryn to learn, or watever.. but i liek this one.. nd i like words nd poems ;p

Rasika GOLD said...
on Feb. 19 2010 at 8:23 am
Rasika GOLD, MUMBAI, Other
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Favorite Quote:
dream high ,think high!!!

wow siply nice


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