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A roller coaster
Is what our frenzied life is
A wait for the pull

That will drive you up
With all of your sweetened dreams
To reach the summit

Though you will realize
As you climb to the acme
The greater the drop

While losing it all
As you take this wicked ride
Till beautiful death




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DIPTI said...
Jun. 20, 2010 at 12:58 am:
wow what an amazing piece. i would like u to check some of my work.keep writing.
 
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nsakwl12 said...
Feb. 15, 2010 at 9:23 pm:
This is really good!! I like how you related the end of the ride with death and how the ups and downs are there. It's really neat!!
 
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