January 24, 2010
By .::Tiffany::. BRONZE, Highland Village, Texas
.::Tiffany::. BRONZE, Highland Village, Texas
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I watch as he approaches
A knife glints in the moonlight
The betrayal hurts me.

The tear drops to the sand
I collapse beside it
And the pain is no more.

The author's comments:
This is my first poem. I hope you all like it.

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on Nov. 15 2010 at 11:37 am
CoolBreeze PLATINUM, Winnemucca, Nevada
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Favorite Quote:
The fear of death follows from the fear of life. A man who lives fully is prepared to die at any time. ~Mark Twain

Wow this is your first poem you say? You have real talent

on Feb. 23 2010 at 4:27 pm
bamboom212 PLATINUM, Chestnut Ridge, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"The truth with a bad intent, is worse than any lie you can ever invent."
"You are smarter than you think. You are stronger than you look. You are braver than you feel."

luvvv it. awesome job


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