The Sky: Birds and Clouds

January 21, 2010
By bass_rockrgrl13 PLATINUM, Burlington, Massachusetts
bass_rockrgrl13 PLATINUM, Burlington, Massachusetts
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Blossoms of power
Envelop the skies above,
Calmly and smoothly.

Puffs of white beauty,
Dangling there in the air,
Following the winds.


The author's comments:
Looking at the window during computer class.

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on Aug. 12 2010 at 3:04 pm
bass_rockrgrl13 PLATINUM, Burlington, Massachusetts
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Thanks you!

on Aug. 8 2010 at 6:07 pm
Alice_in_Wonderland GOLD, San Clemente, California
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Favorite Quote:
“I could give up, I could stay stuck, or I could move on, So I put one foot front of the other, No no no nothing’s gonna break my stride, “ –David Archuleta (The Other Side of Down)

Wow, that was really pretty!

on Jun. 11 2010 at 6:29 pm
Artst123 SILVER, Burlington, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
When life gives you lemons, throw them back and tell life to make its own lemonade.
When life gives you melons, you know something is wrong

"I write to create
In the world’s massive novel
A page of my own"

-By Emily M., NW Washington, DC

Some one was day dreaming, i think. by the way, aren't the shades closed in the computer class?

on Feb. 4 2010 at 10:01 am
bass_rockrgrl13 PLATINUM, Burlington, Massachusetts
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Yep! Good job. =)

_Jinx_ GOLD said...
on Feb. 3 2010 at 9:09 pm
_Jinx_ GOLD, Liberty, South Carolina
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First one was birds, second clouds?

on Feb. 3 2010 at 6:28 pm
bass_rockrgrl13 PLATINUM, Burlington, Massachusetts
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Thanks! I appreciate your opinion. Could you figure out which haiku was about birds and which was about clouds? =)

_Jinx_ GOLD said...
on Feb. 1 2010 at 3:36 pm
_Jinx_ GOLD, Liberty, South Carolina
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=]

This is a really beautiful

piece.. it has a good flow to it.

Isn't this like a haiku?

Its neat how you put two together =D


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