The Sky: Birds and Clouds

January 21, 2010
Blossoms of power
Envelop the skies above,
Calmly and smoothly.

Puffs of white beauty,
Dangling there in the air,
Following the winds.

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ilovewriting95 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 8, 2010 at 6:07 pm
Wow, that was really pretty!
pfgoldfish13 replied...
Aug. 12, 2010 at 3:04 pm
Thanks you!
pfgoldfish13 said...
Feb. 4, 2010 at 10:01 am
Yep! Good job. =)
_Jinx_ said...
Feb. 1, 2010 at 3:36 pm
This is a really beautiful
piece.. it has a good flow to it.
Isn't this like a haiku?
Its neat how you put two together =D
pfgoldfish13 replied...
Feb. 3, 2010 at 6:28 pm
Thanks! I appreciate your opinion. Could you figure out which haiku was about birds and which was about clouds? =)
_Jinx_ replied...
Feb. 3, 2010 at 9:09 pm
First one was birds, second clouds?
Artst123 replied...
Jun. 11, 2010 at 6:29 pm
Some one was day dreaming, i think. by the way, aren't the shades closed in the computer class?
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