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I Know Everything

When I kiss you I
can taste the lies that you had
fed me all this time

Why don't you kiss me
the way you kissed her soft, red lips flavored cherry

You think I don't know
what you've been hiding from me
but I'll tell you what

When your sorry butt
gets dumped tomorrow I will
tell you everything.



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GettingStronger said...
Jan. 1, 2011 at 3:40 pm
You did capture the feelings quite well. I love the last part! Could you check out some of my work? I'm a new writer, and I need some help.
 
xBaByGiRrL22x said...
Mar. 23, 2010 at 6:09 pm
haha very very good.
i luv it.
u definetly have a gr8 talent ;))
 
sasssgirrrl22 said...
Feb. 21, 2010 at 5:04 pm
wow. very powerful and lol luv the last part. gr8 job
 
kellyisgr8 said...
Jan. 30, 2010 at 12:06 pm
very nice this si also going in my favorites
 
liddle_countrygirl said...
Jan. 29, 2010 at 12:35 pm
this inspires me
 
flamesword said...
Jan. 22, 2010 at 10:55 am
raw and true
 
puppy-dog-eyes This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jan. 21, 2010 at 5:06 pm
very very very nice and brilliant
 
9CatsPerLife101 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Jan. 21, 2010 at 5:18 pm
:) would love to see some of your wokr as well
 
ChocolateCherryKiss said...
Jan. 19, 2010 at 9:18 pm
yay ive never been cheated on either! but then again ive never had a bf so yeah. but i believe those feelings!
 
9CatsPerLife101 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Jan. 21, 2010 at 5:18 pm
thank you, any comment is always appreciated
 
candybar2008 said...
Jan. 19, 2010 at 6:48 pm
*gasp* well congrats on never being cheated on, but i definitely applaud you for getting the feelign of being cheated on SPOT ON
 
9CatsPerLife101 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Jan. 20, 2010 at 6:38 pm
haha then again ive never actually been in a real relatinship...ok maybe once for like 3 weeks ><
 
HorsesCANfly21 said...
Jan. 19, 2010 at 6:36 pm
love the emotion in these words. and trust me you captured everything perfectly.
 
9CatsPerLife101 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Jan. 20, 2010 at 6:37 pm
yay! so happy lol.
 
9CatsPerLife101 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jan. 18, 2010 at 4:37 pm
oops sorry in the second stanza there's supposed to be another line that starts with 'lips flavored cherry". My bad! Typing error..
 
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