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I Know Everything

December 29, 2009
By 9CatsPerLife101 PLATINUM, Fairfax, Virginia
9CatsPerLife101 PLATINUM, Fairfax, Virginia
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When I kiss you I
can taste the lies that you had
fed me all this time

Why don't you kiss me
the way you kissed her soft, red lips flavored cherry

You think I don't know
what you've been hiding from me
but I'll tell you what

When your sorry butt
gets dumped tomorrow I will
tell you everything.


The author's comments:
This is a rather daring piece for me, seeing as I have never been cheated on, but I hope I captured the feelings involved with it.

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on Jan. 1 2011 at 3:40 pm
HisPrincess827 BRONZE, Gaylesville, Alabama
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Favorite Quote:
I dwell on the past, love the present, &+ can't wait until the future. <3

You did capture the feelings quite well. I love the last part! Could you check out some of my work? I'm a new writer, and I need some help.

on Mar. 23 2010 at 6:09 pm
xBaByGiRrL22x PLATINUM, Pearl River, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"The goal isn't to live forever, but create something that will."
"If you wanna go, baby let's go; if you wanna rock, I'm ready to roll.''
"No one ever said it'd be easy. They just said it'd be worth it." <3

haha very very good.

i luv it.

u definetly have a gr8 talent ;))

on Feb. 21 2010 at 5:04 pm
sasssgirrrl22 PLATINUM, Pearl River, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"Giving up is not a part of my vocabulary."
"Don't let the fear of striking out keep you from playing the game."
"Truth be told I miss ya, truth be told I'm lying."

wow. very powerful and lol luv the last part. gr8 job

kellyisgr8 said...
on Jan. 30 2010 at 12:06 pm
kellyisgr8, Fairfax, Virginia
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very nice this si also going in my favorites

kellyisgr8 said...
on Jan. 29 2010 at 12:35 pm
kellyisgr8, Fairfax, Virginia
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this inspires me

kellyisgr8 said...
on Jan. 22 2010 at 10:55 am
kellyisgr8, Fairfax, Virginia
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raw and true

on Jan. 21 2010 at 5:18 pm
9CatsPerLife101 PLATINUM, Fairfax, Virginia
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:) would love to see some of your wokr as well

on Jan. 21 2010 at 5:18 pm
9CatsPerLife101 PLATINUM, Fairfax, Virginia
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thank you, any comment is always appreciated

on Jan. 21 2010 at 5:06 pm
9CatsPerLife101 PLATINUM, Fairfax, Virginia
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very very very nice and brilliant

on Jan. 20 2010 at 6:38 pm
9CatsPerLife101 PLATINUM, Fairfax, Virginia
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haha then again ive never actually been in a real relatinship...ok maybe once for like 3 weeks ><

on Jan. 20 2010 at 6:37 pm
9CatsPerLife101 PLATINUM, Fairfax, Virginia
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yay! so happy lol.

kellyisgr8 said...
on Jan. 19 2010 at 9:18 pm
kellyisgr8, Fairfax, Virginia
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yay ive never been cheated on either! but then again ive never had a bf so yeah. but i believe those feelings!

kellyisgr8 said...
on Jan. 19 2010 at 6:48 pm
kellyisgr8, Fairfax, Virginia
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*gasp* well congrats on never being cheated on, but i definitely applaud you for getting the feelign of being cheated on SPOT ON

kellyisgr8 said...
on Jan. 19 2010 at 6:36 pm
kellyisgr8, Fairfax, Virginia
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love the emotion in these words. and trust me you captured everything perfectly.

on Jan. 18 2010 at 4:37 pm
9CatsPerLife101 PLATINUM, Fairfax, Virginia
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oops sorry in the second stanza there's supposed to be another line that starts with 'lips flavored cherry". My bad! Typing error..


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