No Longer

December 29, 2009
By 9CatsPerLife101 PLATINUM, Fairfax, Virginia
9CatsPerLife101 PLATINUM, Fairfax, Virginia
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Your lips no longer
sing sweet words of our future
that tempted me so.

Your hands no longer
hold the power to make me
melt with their caress

Your eyes no longer
swallow me in their depth the
way they did before

I can finally
sleep without dreaming of you
and me together.


The author's comments:
I have actually not been in a relationship like this, but the inspiration came from past crushes that I've gotten over.

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on Jan. 21 2010 at 5:01 pm
9CatsPerLife101 PLATINUM, Fairfax, Virginia
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great flow of words, one of the best haikus out there

on Jan. 21 2010 at 5:00 pm
9CatsPerLife101 PLATINUM, Fairfax, Virginia
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there' s magic in these words. good job :D

on Jan. 21 2010 at 4:59 pm
9CatsPerLife101 PLATINUM, Fairfax, Virginia
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this is so powerful and deep.

on Jan. 20 2010 at 6:31 pm
9CatsPerLife101 PLATINUM, Fairfax, Virginia
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that's very flattering ;]

kellyisgr8 said...
on Jan. 19 2010 at 9:27 pm
kellyisgr8, Fairfax, Virginia
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i understand where this is coming from and i think ur brilliant!

kellyisgr8 said...
on Jan. 19 2010 at 6:48 pm
kellyisgr8, Fairfax, Virginia
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this is pretty tight.

kellyisgr8 said...
on Jan. 19 2010 at 6:37 pm
kellyisgr8, Fairfax, Virginia
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INCREDIBLE.

on Jan. 19 2010 at 5:15 pm
9CatsPerLife101 PLATINUM, Fairfax, Virginia
20 articles 0 photos 96 comments
thanks would love to read some of yours :] I do have more haikus

on Jan. 18 2010 at 9:04 pm
sasssgirrrl22 PLATINUM, Pearl River, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"Giving up is not a part of my vocabulary."
"Don't let the fear of striking out keep you from playing the game."
"Truth be told I miss ya, truth be told I'm lying."

really good. luv the wording. gr8 job keep it up!!


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