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No Longer

Your lips no longer
sing sweet words of our future
that tempted me so.

Your hands no longer
hold the power to make me
melt with their caress

Your eyes no longer
swallow me in their depth the
way they did before

I can finally
sleep without dreaming of you
and me together.



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mysticmagic29 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jan. 21, 2010 at 4:59 pm:
this is so powerful and deep.
 
9CatsPerLife101 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Jan. 21, 2010 at 5:16 pm :
lol appreciate it very much!
 
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ChocolateCherryKiss said...
Jan. 19, 2010 at 9:27 pm:
i understand where this is coming from and i think ur brilliant!
 
9CatsPerLife101 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Jan. 21, 2010 at 5:16 pm :
im glad you understand, means a lot to me
 
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candybar2008 said...
Jan. 19, 2010 at 6:48 pm:
this is pretty tight.
 
9CatsPerLife101 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Jan. 21, 2010 at 5:15 pm :
thanks! :)
 
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HorsesCANfly21 said...
Jan. 19, 2010 at 6:37 pm:
INCREDIBLE.
 
9CatsPerLife101 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Jan. 20, 2010 at 6:31 pm :
that's very flattering ;]
 
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sasssgirrrl22 said...
Jan. 18, 2010 at 9:04 pm:
really good. luv the wording. gr8 job keep it up!!
 
9CatsPerLife101 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Jan. 19, 2010 at 5:15 pm :
thanks would love to read some of yours :] I do have more haikus
 
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