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No Longer

Your lips no longer
sing sweet words of our future
that tempted me so.

Your hands no longer
hold the power to make me
melt with their caress

Your eyes no longer
swallow me in their depth the
way they did before

I can finally
sleep without dreaming of you
and me together.



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yezzey said...
Jul. 19, 2011 at 7:06 am:
the second i read this i had a crush in mind....it's very well done and eas to realare to :)
 
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Melissa G. said...
Feb. 10, 2011 at 2:55 pm:
I really like your poem it was very moving in a lot of ways. And I think you should keep up the good work. 
 
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LilEd said...
Nov. 12, 2010 at 3:48 pm:
That feeling always sucks but great poem!
 
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rinrin said...
Oct. 5, 2010 at 7:36 am:

hate that feeling, but love this poem:)

stay cool my friend.:)

 
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GangstaEyes This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 9, 2010 at 2:45 pm:
I La-La-Loooove this!! It is really catchy and flows really well. Check out my poem "Not for Me" if you get a chance? Thanks and keep up the good stuff!
 
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jesseay09 said...
Jun. 4, 2010 at 9:32 pm:
Nice .....
 
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AmberRose said...
Apr. 2, 2010 at 6:20 pm:
This is great!!! :) Please comment on some of my work!!!
 
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justbe-3 said...
Mar. 29, 2010 at 6:08 pm:

love this!

 

 
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bound4life4ever This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Feb. 28, 2010 at 4:40 pm:
this is awesomely awesome! i love this cuz even if u havnt been in a relationship like this..i have nd it hurts! its exactly how i felt!
 
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kellyisgr8 said...
Jan. 30, 2010 at 12:07 pm:
i really enjoyed reading this
 
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liddle_countrygirl said...
Jan. 29, 2010 at 12:33 pm:
this si in my favorites!
 
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FireandIce said...
Jan. 22, 2010 at 11:19 am:
strong verses. i like!
 
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tootsieroll! said...
Jan. 22, 2010 at 11:18 am:
this is the story of my life. or at least my life as of last week :)
 
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SuKuRa said...
Jan. 22, 2010 at 10:57 am:
i agree this is very good
 
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flamesword said...
Jan. 22, 2010 at 10:53 am:
hmm very thought provoking
 
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puppy-dog-eyes This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jan. 21, 2010 at 5:05 pm:
love the theme of no longer. i think it's a great subject. LOVE all your work.
 
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abcdefg This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jan. 21, 2010 at 5:03 pm:
can this get any better? ;)
 
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Melonhead111 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jan. 21, 2010 at 5:01 pm:
great flow of words, one of the best haikus out there
 
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crazzyygirl This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jan. 21, 2010 at 5:00 pm:
there' s magic in these words. good job :D
 
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mysticmagic29 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jan. 21, 2010 at 4:59 pm:
this is so powerful and deep.
 
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