No Longer

December 29, 2009
By 9CatsPerLife101 PLATINUM, Fairfax, Virginia
9CatsPerLife101 PLATINUM, Fairfax, Virginia
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Your lips no longer
sing sweet words of our future
that tempted me so.

Your hands no longer
hold the power to make me
melt with their caress

Your eyes no longer
swallow me in their depth the
way they did before

I can finally
sleep without dreaming of you
and me together.


The author's comments:
I have actually not been in a relationship like this, but the inspiration came from past crushes that I've gotten over.

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yezzey said...
on Jul. 19 2011 at 7:06 am
yezzey, Springfield, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
forgive, but don't forget

the second i read this i had a crush in mind....it's very well done and eas to realare to :)

on Feb. 10 2011 at 2:55 pm
Mermaidmissy SILVER, Las Vegas, Nevada
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I really like your poem it was very moving in a lot of ways. And I think you should keep up the good work. 

LilEd BRONZE said...
on Nov. 12 2010 at 3:48 pm
LilEd BRONZE, Northglenn, Colorado
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Favorite Quote:
"When will there be peace on Earth? When the Earth falls to pieces"-Tupac Shakur

That feeling always sucks but great poem!

rinrin said...
on Oct. 5 2010 at 7:36 am

hate that feeling, but love this poem:)

stay cool my friend.:)


on Jul. 9 2010 at 2:45 pm
Alcanno DIAMOND, Mexia, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
"If you love life, don't waste time, for time is what life is
made up of."

-- Bruce Lee

I La-La-Loooove this!! It is really catchy and flows really well. Check out my poem "Not for Me" if you get a chance? Thanks and keep up the good stuff!

on Jun. 4 2010 at 9:32 pm
jesseay09 SILVER, Palm Bay, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
Be who you are and say what you feel.... Because those that matter... don't mind... And those that mind... don't matter.

Nice .....

on Apr. 2 2010 at 6:20 pm
AmberRose SILVER, Richmond, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
"Even Monkeys fall out of trees."

This is great!!! :) Please comment on some of my work!!!

justbe-3 said...
on Mar. 29 2010 at 6:08 pm
justbe-3, Hollis, New Hampshire
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Favorite Quote:
"You live but once, you might as well be amusing." -Coco Chanel
"Here is the test to find whether your mission on Earth is finished: if you're alive, it isn't." -Richard Bach
"Gravitation is not responsible for people falling in love." -Einstein

love this!

 


on Feb. 28 2010 at 4:40 pm
bound4life4ever PLATINUM, Jamaica, New York
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Favorite Quote:
Never take life seriously. Nobody gets out alive anyway.

this is awesomely awesome! i love this cuz even if u havnt been in a relationship like this..i have nd it hurts! its exactly how i felt!

kellyisgr8 said...
on Jan. 30 2010 at 12:07 pm
kellyisgr8, Fairfax, Virginia
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i really enjoyed reading this

kellyisgr8 said...
on Jan. 29 2010 at 12:33 pm
kellyisgr8, Fairfax, Virginia
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this si in my favorites!

kellyisgr8 said...
on Jan. 22 2010 at 11:19 am
kellyisgr8, Fairfax, Virginia
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strong verses. i like!

kellyisgr8 said...
on Jan. 22 2010 at 11:18 am
kellyisgr8, Fairfax, Virginia
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this is the story of my life. or at least my life as of last week :)

kellyisgr8 said...
on Jan. 22 2010 at 10:57 am
kellyisgr8, Fairfax, Virginia
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i agree this is very good

kellyisgr8 said...
on Jan. 22 2010 at 10:53 am
kellyisgr8, Fairfax, Virginia
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hmm very thought provoking

on Jan. 21 2010 at 5:16 pm
9CatsPerLife101 PLATINUM, Fairfax, Virginia
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lol appreciate it very much!

on Jan. 21 2010 at 5:16 pm
9CatsPerLife101 PLATINUM, Fairfax, Virginia
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im glad you understand, means a lot to me

on Jan. 21 2010 at 5:15 pm
9CatsPerLife101 PLATINUM, Fairfax, Virginia
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thanks! :)

on Jan. 21 2010 at 5:05 pm
9CatsPerLife101 PLATINUM, Fairfax, Virginia
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love the theme of no longer. i think it's a great subject. LOVE all your work.

on Jan. 21 2010 at 5:03 pm
9CatsPerLife101 PLATINUM, Fairfax, Virginia
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can this get any better? ;)


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