Suffering from Seasonal Haikus

Winter born creatures
Skate on frosty glass dewdrops
Breathing foggy air

Autumn leaves falling
Gracefully to the ground
Crunching beneath me

Summer heat rises
From the blacktop driveways
Soaking shirts in sweat

Spring fever arrives
To greet the world and announce
The birth of new life





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Grasshopper007 said...
Apr. 28, 2010 at 4:50 pm
I thought that your haiku was better than some of the ones that got into the magazine! Keep up the good work!
 
Amanda_Reckonwith replied...
Apr. 28, 2010 at 5:55 pm

Thank you so much! I really enjoy haiku, it's a passion, so it's really cool when someone else enjoys them! C:

 

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Kay4theRoses said...
Jan. 19, 2010 at 12:56 pm
i liked how you wrote about the year and not limit it to one season like alot of haikus
 
CatGirlPrime replied...
Jan. 19, 2010 at 4:26 pm
Thank you for your input!
The seasons are all cyclical; you can't have one without the other, so I wanted to keep all my seasons together to express that more.
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Kay4theRoses replied...
Jan. 23, 2010 at 1:04 pm
well, you did a very good job
 
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