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I Promise

December 17, 2009
By bamboom212 PLATINUM, Chestnut Ridge, New York
bamboom212 PLATINUM, Chestnut Ridge, New York
23 articles 0 photos 155 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The truth with a bad intent, is worse than any lie you can ever invent."
"You are smarter than you think. You are stronger than you look. You are braver than you feel."


It's not what you think;
You're never alone in this
I promise;

I have learned a lot;
Know much about little things;
Promise you I'll stay

Alone, we are strong;
Together, we are complete;
We should work as one

Despite all of this
I promise I won't let go;
Our bind is too strong

Without any doubt
Two is lot better than one;
I promise you it



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on Jul. 16 2012 at 9:24 pm
awesomelyme GOLD, Chicago, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
Akthough the truth may hurt, not knowing is the worst kind of punishment.

that was a really great poem. i enjoyed it. but in the first stanze yu only used 3 syllables rather than 5.

irishlass317 said...
on May. 11 2012 at 6:05 pm
irishlass317, Jefferson City, Missouri
0 articles 0 photos 137 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I asked Jesus 'How much do you love me?' He answered 'This much.' And He streched out His arms and died."

I love it! It was sooooooo good
!!! :D <3

 


on Apr. 23 2012 at 5:49 pm
bamboom212 PLATINUM, Chestnut Ridge, New York
23 articles 0 photos 155 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The truth with a bad intent, is worse than any lie you can ever invent."
"You are smarter than you think. You are stronger than you look. You are braver than you feel."

thank you. yeah, i noticed a couple mistakes like that after I submitted >.<

on Dec. 9 2011 at 8:58 am
ManekiNeko SILVER, Cincinnati, Ohio
8 articles 1 photo 39 comments

Favorite Quote:
"It is better to keep your mouth shut and be thought a fool than to open it and prove it to be true."

Third line in the first stanza has only 3 syllables.

on Aug. 22 2011 at 7:50 pm
bamboom212 PLATINUM, Chestnut Ridge, New York
23 articles 0 photos 155 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The truth with a bad intent, is worse than any lie you can ever invent."
"You are smarter than you think. You are stronger than you look. You are braver than you feel."

thank u so much;D

on Aug. 22 2011 at 7:50 pm
bamboom212 PLATINUM, Chestnut Ridge, New York
23 articles 0 photos 155 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The truth with a bad intent, is worse than any lie you can ever invent."
"You are smarter than you think. You are stronger than you look. You are braver than you feel."

aw thank u! im so glad u liked it:)

on Apr. 11 2011 at 8:00 pm
whateverjuliet BRONZE, Miami, Florida
3 articles 3 photos 89 comments

Favorite Quote:
true love never dies,it only gets stronger with time.

love love love it!

on Mar. 20 2011 at 12:24 pm
HeatherBee BRONZE, I Live In, Texas
1 article 0 photos 1985 comments

Favorite Quote:
Go on and try to tear me down. I will be rising from the ground, like a skyscraper

Love is louder than the pressure to be perfect

dawww how sweet ^^ Awesome Job!!! :D

on Feb. 20 2011 at 1:56 pm
bamboom212 PLATINUM, Chestnut Ridge, New York
23 articles 0 photos 155 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The truth with a bad intent, is worse than any lie you can ever invent."
"You are smarter than you think. You are stronger than you look. You are braver than you feel."

thankk u. it really means alott=]

on Feb. 10 2011 at 3:02 pm
Mermaidmissy SILVER, Las Vegas, Nevada
8 articles 0 photos 136 comments
I really like your poems so much. It was very moving and very pretty at the same time. I think you should keep up the good work to. 

on Nov. 8 2010 at 8:36 pm
bamboom212 PLATINUM, Chestnut Ridge, New York
23 articles 0 photos 155 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The truth with a bad intent, is worse than any lie you can ever invent."
"You are smarter than you think. You are stronger than you look. You are braver than you feel."

aww thankk u so much. it meanz alottt(:

on Oct. 17 2010 at 3:22 pm
CammyLashay SILVER, Java, Virginia
9 articles 0 photos 32 comments

Favorite Quote:
Failure is not for me.

loved it no more can be said =)

on Jun. 29 2010 at 5:46 pm
bamboom212 PLATINUM, Chestnut Ridge, New York
23 articles 0 photos 155 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The truth with a bad intent, is worse than any lie you can ever invent."
"You are smarter than you think. You are stronger than you look. You are braver than you feel."

sure! id luv 2. thxx 4 takin the time 2 read:)

on Jun. 28 2010 at 11:25 pm
ShenelleCrystal SILVER, M, New York
7 articles 0 photos 186 comments

Favorite Quote:
Laugh your heart out dance in the rain cherish the memories ignore the pain love + learn forget and forgive because remember you only have [one life to live] ♥

that was great ! please come check out my work :)

on Jun. 6 2010 at 9:42 pm
bamboom212 PLATINUM, Chestnut Ridge, New York
23 articles 0 photos 155 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The truth with a bad intent, is worse than any lie you can ever invent."
"You are smarter than you think. You are stronger than you look. You are braver than you feel."

lol aw thxxx everyone 4 da commntz!!!

SissyPooh said...
on May. 12 2010 at 12:09 pm
iireally lyk dhzz!!! OMq iireally du,,,keep writinq more(ihm seriousz)

on Mar. 21 2010 at 8:55 pm
Vampwriter93 GOLD, Lawrence, Kansas
19 articles 0 photos 6 comments

Favorite Quote:
i dont have one...i use so many and i get them from movies and tv shows

i love this...i can relate to that so well

on Mar. 1 2010 at 3:03 pm
bamboom212 PLATINUM, Chestnut Ridge, New York
23 articles 0 photos 155 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The truth with a bad intent, is worse than any lie you can ever invent."
"You are smarter than you think. You are stronger than you look. You are braver than you feel."

ha thank u! im glad u can relate ;)

on Mar. 1 2010 at 12:46 pm
Peace420 BRONZE, Williston, Florida
2 articles 0 photos 42 comments
I love this Dude!!!!! Really awesome. It reminds me of my family.....

on Feb. 18 2010 at 8:21 pm
bamboom212 PLATINUM, Chestnut Ridge, New York
23 articles 0 photos 155 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The truth with a bad intent, is worse than any lie you can ever invent."
"You are smarter than you think. You are stronger than you look. You are braver than you feel."

ha sorry. the two is lot better than one is intentional, but not the i promise lol. thanxx :))


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