When there's love

November 17, 2009
By Anonymous

When there's love, there’s pain
When there's sun, there's always rain
Complicating plain

Love is quite simple
No rules, no guides, no answers
Love is very clear

You'll love me always?
If I oxidise your heart
Will you love me then?

Peace brings unity
Understanding will bring peace
Then comes the wisdom


The author's comments:
I was inspired by all the things people say about love. When they say its great., and its blind. The feeling you get when you fall in love and the feeling you get when you fall out of love. The questions that come along within a relationship: the "Will you love me if...." questions. While writing it, I thought about my past experiences with people telling me that they loved me and then hurting me. How wise I've become. Love is simple. Either you love someone or you don't. I wanted to go all over the place with the focus because that's how a teenager's mind wonders. I'm satisfied with the outcome of this piece because I portrayed what I was trying to when you dig deeper.

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