Clouds

Rolling slowly by,

Clouds fill the afternoon sky,

Masking blue behind them.



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Mimi15 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Apr. 22, 2012 at 12:01 pm
Check out my haiku broke? :)
 
dragonfly95 said...
Mar. 31, 2012 at 8:54 am
awsome....please check out my work sometime.
 
beautifulspirit This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Dec. 12, 2011 at 11:26 am

Simple, yet powerful. This is why I love the haiku format~ Good job!

 

 
IamtheshyStargirl said...
Oct. 29, 2011 at 12:54 pm
Oh wow, beautiful, though not as emotional as it could/should be. That is, if you were going for a traditional haiku.
 
pnkninja11 said...
Mar. 1, 2011 at 7:33 am
Great imagery! Keep up the good work! :D
 
BleedingRose replied...
Oct. 15, 2011 at 2:53 pm

thanks for the comment! 

-Roze

 
Kali123 said...
Nov. 11, 2010 at 7:44 am
really leaves the reader wonder..Great
 
BleedingRose replied...
Nov. 11, 2010 at 2:17 pm

Why shanks!  ;)

-Rose

 
Egyptiangirl13 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 2, 2010 at 8:47 pm
Wow!! this is really good-i especially like the last line-its really good!! awesome job!! please check out some of my work when you get the chance!!:)
 
BleedingRose replied...
Nov. 11, 2010 at 2:16 pm
Thanks so much for the comment, I'm super gald u liked it  :D  Of course I'll check out your work, I look forward to it!
 
BleedingRose replied...
Nov. 11, 2010 at 2:16 pm

ahem.  I meant *glad.

-Rose

 
i.ll_be_fine_899 said...
Jul. 2, 2010 at 8:06 am
:DDDD that made me smile :))))
 
BleedingRose replied...
Nov. 11, 2010 at 2:18 pm

That's what my poems are for!  Not exactly to make you smile, but to show emotion's progress.  :D  Thanks!

-Rose

 
Liquid_Sky This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Apr. 8, 2010 at 3:53 pm
"Masking blue behind them"
My favorite part ^_^
 
BleedingRose replied...
Apr. 9, 2010 at 7:23 pm

Thanks so much, I'm happy to know you liked it! 

-Rose

 
Bearded Goth Girl said...
Mar. 24, 2010 at 5:50 am
This peom is really peaceful i love it
 
BleedingRose replied...
Mar. 27, 2010 at 7:38 pm
Thanks so much for the comment!  :)
 
b_swain said...
Mar. 17, 2010 at 8:09 pm
Nice piece. I liked your description.
 
BleedingRose replied...
Mar. 18, 2010 at 4:50 pm
Thanks for the comment!
-Rose
 
b_swain replied...
Mar. 22, 2010 at 3:58 pm
Your welcome!
 
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