Clouds

November 23, 2009
By BleedingRose PLATINUM, Frederic, Wisconsin
BleedingRose PLATINUM, Frederic, Wisconsin
33 articles 1 photo 378 comments

Favorite Quote:
*The darkness holds infinite possibilities.

(mine)


Rolling slowly by,

Clouds fill the afternoon sky,

Masking blue behind them.



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on Apr. 22 2012 at 12:01 pm
Mimi15 PLATINUM, Belfast, Maine
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Check out my haiku broke? :)

on Mar. 31 2012 at 8:54 am
dragonfly95 SILVER, Argaon, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
'' there is nothing to fear but fear its self''

awsome....please check out my work sometime.

on Dec. 12 2011 at 11:26 am
beautifulspirit PLATINUM, Alpharetta, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams.
--Eleanor Roosevelt

Simple, yet powerful. This is why I love the haiku format~ Good job!

 


on Oct. 29 2011 at 12:54 pm
IamtheshyStargirl PLATINUM, Lothlorien, Utah
44 articles 16 photos 2216 comments

Favorite Quote:
Boredom instigates extreme creativity.
~Amoniel

"Bowing gratefully to all of my subjects, 'thank you. Thank you. The pleasure is mine." Nah, I'm just kidding. We're all kings together.'"
~Thesilentraven

Oh wow, beautiful, though not as emotional as it could/should be. That is, if you were going for a traditional haiku.

on Oct. 15 2011 at 2:53 pm
BleedingRose PLATINUM, Frederic, Wisconsin
33 articles 1 photo 378 comments

Favorite Quote:
*The darkness holds infinite possibilities.

(mine)

thanks for the comment! 

-Roze


on Mar. 1 2011 at 7:33 am
pnkninja11 BRONZE, Partlow, Virginia
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Great imagery! Keep up the good work! :D

on Nov. 11 2010 at 2:18 pm
BleedingRose PLATINUM, Frederic, Wisconsin
33 articles 1 photo 378 comments

Favorite Quote:
*The darkness holds infinite possibilities.

(mine)

That's what my poems are for!  Not exactly to make you smile, but to show emotion's progress.  :D  Thanks!

-Rose


on Nov. 11 2010 at 2:17 pm
BleedingRose PLATINUM, Frederic, Wisconsin
33 articles 1 photo 378 comments

Favorite Quote:
*The darkness holds infinite possibilities.

(mine)

Why shanks!  ;)

-Rose


on Nov. 11 2010 at 2:16 pm
BleedingRose PLATINUM, Frederic, Wisconsin
33 articles 1 photo 378 comments

Favorite Quote:
*The darkness holds infinite possibilities.

(mine)

ahem.  I meant *glad.

-Rose


on Nov. 11 2010 at 2:16 pm
BleedingRose PLATINUM, Frederic, Wisconsin
33 articles 1 photo 378 comments

Favorite Quote:
*The darkness holds infinite possibilities.

(mine)

Thanks so much for the comment, I'm super gald u liked it  :D  Of course I'll check out your work, I look forward to it!

Kali123 BRONZE said...
on Nov. 11 2010 at 7:44 am
Kali123 BRONZE, Cleveland, Ohio
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really leaves the reader wonder..Great

on Jul. 2 2010 at 8:47 pm
Egyptiangirl13 GOLD, Kansas City, Missouri
14 articles 0 photos 501 comments

Favorite Quote:
\"either write something worth reading or do something worth writing. -Benjamin Franklin

\"If columbus would have turned back, no one would have blamed him. No one would have remembered him either.\"

\"If music be the food of love, play on.\"

Wow!! this is really good-i especially like the last line-its really good!! awesome job!! please check out some of my work when you get the chance!!:)

on Jul. 2 2010 at 8:06 am
HeatherBee BRONZE, I Live In, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
Go on and try to tear me down. I will be rising from the ground, like a skyscraper

Love is louder than the pressure to be perfect

:DDDD that made me smile :))))

on Apr. 9 2010 at 7:23 pm
BleedingRose PLATINUM, Frederic, Wisconsin
33 articles 1 photo 378 comments

Favorite Quote:
*The darkness holds infinite possibilities.

(mine)

Thanks so much, I'm happy to know you liked it! 

-Rose


on Apr. 8 2010 at 3:53 pm
LiquidSky PLATINUM, Libby, Montana
20 articles 2 photos 23 comments

Favorite Quote:
Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance.
-Carl Sandberg

"Masking blue behind them"
My favorite part ^_^

on Mar. 27 2010 at 7:38 pm
BleedingRose PLATINUM, Frederic, Wisconsin
33 articles 1 photo 378 comments

Favorite Quote:
*The darkness holds infinite possibilities.

(mine)

Thanks so much for the comment!  :)

on Mar. 24 2010 at 5:50 am
This peom is really peaceful i love it

on Mar. 22 2010 at 3:58 pm
Brittaner DIAMOND, Edenton, North Carolina
51 articles 0 photos 88 comments

Favorite Quote:
"words are just songs without the corny elevator music behind them"
-Me (random thought)

Your welcome!

on Mar. 18 2010 at 4:50 pm
BleedingRose PLATINUM, Frederic, Wisconsin
33 articles 1 photo 378 comments

Favorite Quote:
*The darkness holds infinite possibilities.

(mine)

Thanks for the comment!

-Rose

on Mar. 17 2010 at 8:09 pm
Brittaner DIAMOND, Edenton, North Carolina
51 articles 0 photos 88 comments

Favorite Quote:
"words are just songs without the corny elevator music behind them"
-Me (random thought)

Nice piece. I liked your description.


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