My love, the sea

November 13, 2009
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I walk towards the sand
I smell salt mixing with air
The sea, oh the sea

I hear birds calling
Waves crashing against the rocks
Sun slowly setting

My feet sink in sand
I take in the fresh salt air
Oh, i love the sea!

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munkyman95 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Dec. 6, 2009 at 4:03 pm
this is really captivating.... I felt as though I could smell the sea! As though I was walking on a beach myself... rely good!
toriLou replied...
Dec. 11, 2009 at 8:48 pm
thank you bunches i was not sure about how it would come out cause i just typed it and submitted without proofing it or anything. thank you so much
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