Simple Signs of Beauty

Her scent in the breeze
Her eyes are brown and lovely
A beautiful smile

Her hair long and brown
Her voice so sweet and so kind
Her touch so, so sweet

Beauty covers her
From up to down, all around
She is so lovely





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munkyman95 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Dec. 6, 2009 at 3:35 pm
very nice, cute, but didn't like that you used sweet twice in the same verse
 
lovelife365 said...
Nov. 28, 2009 at 5:35 pm
really sweet =)
 
Fayrouz This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Nov. 26, 2009 at 1:18 pm
Aww! Your friend must be super...."proud"...like idk how to say it, kinda shy, kinda proud of you to write such a wonderful poem about her.
 
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